Gota hand it to ya, its quite intriguing.
Two years it's been a while, and you know what I desided to read your story again, even if its only six chapters long, do you think you will update it some day? You have a way with word that captivates me, and the story in of itself is very unice, like it could almost stand alone. I would like to know what will happen with the kitsune kits will they aid the investigators in saving Kagome som how. If Kagome is save will she be okay? Mentaly? Will Inu no tasha ever beable to ammend the damage he created between the two brothers. Does Inuyasha now blame Sesshomaru for his mothers death? Missunderstanding are alway the saddest thing to hear and/or read about. I don't think I like the dragons at all, poor Kagura I don't think she's going to get to be with Sesshomaru, but then again I don't really know...XP.....So I Naraku a bad guy in this one I would be nice if he wasn't using Toran but really did care for her. Miroku I wander if he would be the one to find Kagome...I'll be she is his niece....Midoriko's daughter....that would be and interesting red line of fate wouldn't it.....Please I know its been a while but maybe you just need someone to tell you that they will enjoy reading if you update, some day I would like to see how this story comes together.........Nyuka
| I actually think this story is really great. I love stories that put the characters in entirely different settings/family dynamics/etc.
The plotline is very unique. I cannot wait to read more. Awesome job!
Lauren (Chapter 6) - Sun 08 Feb 2009
| This is a very interesting story, and so far I love it. Update soon!!!!
wow! this is soooo in depth, you've obviously thought this out very well. i can't wait for your next update.
utterchaos247 (Chapter 4) - Sat 20 Sep 2008
| great story so far
Lauren (Chapter 4) - Sat 20 Sep 2008
| Amazing story!!!!!! Update asap :)
InuPriestess (Chapter 2) - Thu 18 Sep 2008
| I am very pleased with this story so far, and hope to read some more very soon. Please keep up the good work. I especially enjoy the uniqueness of this story. I haven't seen a plot quite like this before. good on ya!
Ja!
Possessed (Chapter 3) - Thu 18 Sep 2008
| This is a very fine story! Good characterization, good plot, great descriptions, I'm enjoying it immensely and I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Nyuka (Chapter 3) - Thu 18 Sep 2008
| Hello Love the fic....FYI I 99.999% sure that you are spelling the characters names correctly...I got in a nasty happit a few years back about collecting the manga and that how the one's you've used are spelt in the book so...yaaaaaaa....any who I'm rambaling....love the topic of the story first one I've STARTED to read that has a theme that has Hanyou's that are tring to take of the world (that is not Naraku...but then again I'll bet he is undercover and is part of the group regardless) I like the backround for Miroku it suits him well...personality is pretty accurate at the moment...ummmmmmm....hmmm ...oh-yes I think it'll be funny when Sesshoumaru find Miroku tailing him...that will be great XD....Myah.......Nyuka
Kagome357 (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Sep 2008
| (((((((((((Trinity!!)))))))) I'm so glad to see you back in the writing game. I enjoyed the story, although I'm not a "in the first person" type of reader. I like where you're taking this. I'll talk to you soon.
| interesting....really interesting. I can hardly wait to read the next chap. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
tina (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Sep 2008
| very well written and I love how you added a bit of history to the story I look forward to the future chapters
tina (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Sep 2008
| yay I am the first to leave a response
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