Love your story. Kinda confuse about some stuff and can you get a beta or someone to edit your story for you? It'll make your story even better.
All ten chapters are nice, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
Please update soon, I really love this story and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you.
Awesome, keep it coming.
Cool, keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
nicole (Chapter 2) - Wed 06 Nov 2013
how is this an kagome nd sesshoumaru fic?
Thank you northpeach, I appreciate it! Great chapter, keep it coming.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
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