Wow, this is an amazing story. I was thinking Inuyasha might have something mental going on as I got part-way through the second chapter and it was only confirmed towards the end. I loved it though, it wasn't what I was expecting and I can't wait to read more!
Inuyasha's story is so sad. I was crying by the end. life is so fucked up sometimes. Thanks for continuing the one shot. It was really good.
sunset in love (Chapter 2) - Wed 25 Feb 2009
| somehow, this really disturb me, does it happened? apparently, since you wrote it based on a real life event... i always thought that these can be happening to our lives, but somehow i might never truly believed that, until now... i really should be more aware... anyway, this is a great chapter, although i'm very happy that you decided to write again, i'm truly sorry about the lay offs, i guess the economic downturn really hurt us all...
| This is a wonderful story. It's very poignant and sad for everyone involved. I read chapter 1 and liked how you portrayed Sess's emotions and feelings. In chapter 2, I was blown away about Yasha's mental state. I didn't see that coming. I hope that in future chapters, Kags gets better and is able to have children. What exactly did happen to Hojo? I take it that Sess had him removed from this world permanently? Great writing and plot. Lots of *hugs and smiles*.
Saholia (Chapter 2) - Tue 24 Feb 2009
Wow, this chapter's so emotional and deep. I like your portrayal of Inuyasha and how his mind refused to accept reality. I hope to read more from this.
lol--I do believe I was one of those begging for a second ch! xD
sess and kagome fan (Chapter 1) - Tue 24 Feb 2009
| I really enjoyed this chapter. You showed Sesshomaru's weak moment, then you showed him getting back to the Sesshomaru we all know and love. On another site, I read a review where the reviewer had asked you to almost rewrite the whole chapter by giving more background. I think how you started and ended this chapter was perfect. If you are a true Sesshomaru fan, you know what his personalty is like. I am glad that you did not change this chapter when you wrote it for this site. PLEASE continue, I cannot wait to read the outcome.
sess and kagome fan (Chapter 1) - Tue 24 Feb 2009
| I really enjoyed this chapter. You showed Sesshomaru's weak moment, then you showed him getting back to the Sesshomaru we all know and love. On another site, I read a review where the reviewer had asked you to almost rewrite the whole chapter by giving more background. I think how you started and ended this chapter was perfect. If you are a true Sesshomaru fan, you know what his personalty is like. I am glad that you did not change this chapter when you wrote it for this site. PLEASE continue, I cannot wait to read the outcome.
arielle langley (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Sep 2008
| wow! thats all i can say is wow this story is so good! please do not make it into a one shot and just continue this as a regular story its soo good! thanks so much for writing this. and if you are making this into a story please i beg of you update asap! thanks again
(Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Sep 2008
| you have to continue this!! or even extend it both ways, back it up and start earlier and continue on, Mush!!! *^_^*
| Wow. As much as I would love to see this as a full blown story, its a very moving oneshot that taps right into the heart. I think you should add more to it...only if you want... :]
| ya gonna continue? it sounds really good....I hope a miracle could happen and Kaggy could get pregnant with Fluffy's kids....hey...are they youkai, hanyou, and miko in this story? I would doubt it because you would think they could smell if she was lying.
Oh Please (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Sep 2008
| This was very tasteful and interesting. You handled her abuse without dragging us through the grit of it and this is how it would be from his point of view. I admit, I didn't think it would be Hojo. but I'm seriously glad it was not Sess who raped her, which is what I feared by the tone at the beginning. I find myself wishing there was another chapter.
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Sep 2008
| Wow. That was dark, intense and not what I was expecting. Could you make a sequel? It was just too short and sweet... needs a part 2.
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