I like it very much ancd now it is one of my favourites.  It is well written and grammatically correct.

This was beautiful. Sexy and hot and absolutely lovely. THe emotion and sex was real and so much better than real. Congratulations. Just perfect.

Love Love it!

I...wow...I...holy....

beyond words

excellent and amazing don't seem to go far enough on this one

I look forward to more of your work!

~Starfyre

Awesome story! I would love to see this expanded, you've got the start of a great AU world in this oneshot.

This is the type of thing one reads again and again and again.  I love how even though there was a large amount of "smut" or whatever,  I never felt overwhelmed by it. I was consumed by what they were feeling and you painted an amazing,  surreal image of love. 

On the downside, now I will be disappointed with reality.  Lol.  Great job!!!