O_O this ending made me bawl like a baby. Beautifully written
Are we going to get more of this wonderful story? :3
This is super dark. Your warnings were just that, warmings. Although it's dark and heart-wrenching, it was still really good. Sometimes I had difficulties connecting the dialog to the plot but it made sense after a second read through. Oddly enough, I don't see too many dark fics, though I figured with the canon universe it'd be an easy segue. I'm glad the characterizations seem to be on-point. I hope all is well on your end. I hope you were able to complete your two original works. I don't expect an update for this anyone soon, bug u just wanted you to know that I enjoyed what you've written thus far. All the best!!
Very well done and I really want to read more now....the only question is WHEN!?!? Phenomanly done, the style flows and is consistant and somehow you make the characters true to their character! Certainly not an easy feat at times. It's dark, but not so dark that it can be traumitizing (though that is a personal opinion). I certainly want to read more of this story!
Woo when a fiction is dark angst lemons and character development you know is awesome
I would only want this to be an kagome and sesshoumaru pairing please
I would personally like to see just a K/S pairing.
I love the story-line. Can't wait until the next update.
Mmmm, tasty and original! I am never disappointed with your work. I love rocky starts with this pair. adds reality to the mix an. Makes the improbable possible. Progression is Devine in these stories. I'll be keeping an eye out for updates. Thank you for such a read! Ps. My vote is giving kagura her own love. Maybe even with another woman. I never see that done and after a rape I could see her trust and desire for men gone.
Yes!! this is turning out really awesome!
To answer your question about Kagura: I wouldn't like her to be added to the pair. It would ruin the Bond in its structure. It could be interesting, later on to just push her little by little in again, but not right now.
I can't wait for the next chapter :3
I love this story already! I think the plot idea is awesome and I can't wait to see how it will all play out. For the pairing- I think I would like for Kagome and Sesshoumaru to remain as they are. Adding Kagura to the mix would feel a little unnatural for me. Though if in the end the majority decides to go for it then I would have no problem with that either. See you in december!
bi thought this was a good chapter with very small baby steps between ssshomaru and kagome. I was also happy to see her not beak down over inuyasha and that inuyasha himself didnt over react. as for kagura, id like to see her with someone but not sesshomaru and kagome. there is plenty going on between just them without adding a tramatized kagura to the mix.
It would be more interesting to pair them both off with different people....
You have this way of showcasing different viewpoints in such an eloquent manner... great chapter
God... that is powerful... Your story is very different... good stuff here
Loved the chapter and the story should remain a sesshoumaru and kagome story.
Have fun with the event! I love this story along with other stories you have written! I vote for Sesshomaru/Kagome/Kagura
Pair her with someone else.
great story, interesting plot!
Great chapter, keep it coming.
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