You did a very fine job with this. I enjoyed the pranks and Hojo's reaction to the imp who wanted to eat him. So funny. The spar turning dangerously close to a battle was very good too and Kagome's explanation of everything she witnessed, not by chose, day after day and all those that she had grown close to so much so that they all became pack, "family". You did really good. Hojo's reaction's to Kagome were childish and immature since he obviously knew she was married/mated and with a large family of her own before ever going to visit. If he were a smart man, he would have left after his first initial feeling of jealousy. Great job. There are a few typos here and there but nothing that takes away from understanding and enjoying the story. JEN
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Sarah (Chapter 1) - Wed 09 Oct 2013
Is this story connected with another story of yours that explains more about the characters and how hojo and her friends now know about her travels and demons, thestory is good but without a back story about what exactly was going on and who everyone was it was hard to get into it
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