This is amazingly done. I'm very please to have click on it. I hope you up date soon and I'll be watching in anticipation! Good job and good luck!
So this is the first time I've seen this theme done so well! You're writing is great and I can't wait to see what happens next. The only thing I would warn you about is to thoroughly re-read before you post a chapter. There were a few parts, especially in the first chapter, where I had to go back and re-read to make sure I understood what was happening! Hope this review doesn't deter you from updating because I serioiusly want to see what's going to happen next and how you're going to play this all out! Great job!
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