So this is the first time I've seen this theme done so well! You're writing is great and I can't wait to see what happens next. The only thing I would warn you about is to thoroughly re-read before you post a chapter. There were a few parts, especially in the first chapter, where I had to go back and re-read to make sure I understood what was happening! Hope this review doesn't deter you from updating because I serioiusly want to see what's going to happen next and how you're going to play this all out! Great job!