So far, so good. You have a very interesting idea and I would love to see how this progresses, though perhaps with a higher (and less strict) word count, considering updates will be sporadic :)
I must say, the instant I saw the length of the drabble, I felt admiration for you- I cannot write a 'perfect' drabble to save my life (let alone without a prompt), so kudos to you!
And now to talk about the actual writing! XD
I love it already- an enjoyable and brilliant summarisation of the prerequisite to the plot, concise yet still capable of evoking strong imagery, (the line about Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru perfectly showed us their relationship) and the final sentence was just masterful in drawing my attention.
*Adds story to Favourites list*
I believe the phrase is 'hook, line and sinker.' I will be eagerly awaiting updates :D (Sorry for saying 'I' so much!)
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
Your stories continue to intrigue me, especially because I have this recent addiction to finding stories where Sesshomaru isn't his usual: aka a demon lord. I'm dying to read more but I have to go. Please tell me I'll have quite a few lovley updates to look forward to!
dear lord! when I read the description my brain just exploded and immediately I think I have to read it. a Sesshomaru nerd and virgin is my dream... terrific
I read the description and though... "Oh lord, I have to read." XD
Hope to read the next chappie soon! <3
Serena (Chapter 1) - Mon 30 Sep 2013
omg. a nerd-sesshomaru fic?!? you dont know how excited i am for this! Just the summary alone is making me squeal!
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