I loved this story! Sesshomaru/Kagome pairing did not feelk rushed like in many fanfics. Thank you so much for writing such a good story.
What a lovely story: well-constructed, flowed well and extremely entertaining. A few typos and grammatical errors here and there but no deal-breakers. Most importantly, I love your voice. I don’t really like first person stories but you sold it and sold it wonderfully. Kagome is snarky, fun, cranky, flawed and adorable. When she sing-songed “Someone’s in trouble” to the general, I loled. I look forward to reading more of your work. Cheers.
This story was well done. From inuyasha turning to a baby. To kagome final seeing her family.I loved the whole story. Keep it up.
great story, excellently written. i look forward to what u come up with next ^_^
Toni (Chapter 44) - Sun 16 Apr 2017
really loved this story and a great ending thank you
Natalia (Chapter 44) - Tue 11 Apr 2017
A beautiful fulfilling end! Thx for writing and sharing this!
Hahaha, the old coot will never change. What a wonderful ending!
Kanda (Chapter 43) - Wed 01 Mar 2017
yes, you evil person. i swore you killed her. all i know is 'tragedy' is one of the genres and i have not had good experiences with those, dearlord. either way, good chapter! poor sesshoumaru must have been scared asf.
Wonderful chapter, the family bonding scene at the end is so lighthearted and sweet!
Kanda (Chapter 42) - Mon 27 Feb 2017
omg, this is pure evilness! what's happening!?
Kanda (Chapter 14) - Mon 27 Feb 2017
hey, this is starting to feel like a kingdom hearts adventure. s'gonna be fun. the ox, though. xD
Too much blood loss? exhaustion? twins? whats going on!?
maria (Chapter 42) - Sun 22 Jan 2017
Whaaat! ? You're mean! Thas a hell of a cliff!
Love the story by he way
When is the next chapter coming out? I loved this chapter.
Eva (Chapter 41) - Tue 11 Oct 2016
That was well worth the wait. I laughed so hard at the Bad Doggy!
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