What a lovely chapter, babygirl! There was so much emotion, for a lot of characters, but what really got me going was Kagome’s point-of-view. Everyone has feelings of fear that he/she will be rejected because of his/her past, and you described that emotional turmoil perfectly with Kagome! What made it better was that her new family still accepts her, despite learning about her past. And what a way to find out! I’m glad her old master is dead T.T Bastard deserved it! I can’t wait to find out what happens in the next chapter *-* Sesshomaru and Kagome are alone again, their emotions are high, so something is gonna happen.
Uh oh! I think that her former master will probably get his just desserts if he tries to claim Kagome as a runaway servant in front of everyone and tries to take her from her new family. I wonder how long before Kagome's marks that state her true status to the world appear. I know that they are supposed to show at around the time she becomes eligible to mate, but I just cannot wait! When I discovered this story, I could not stop reading it until I came to the last chapter. I cannot wait for the next installment!
Tiffany (Chapter 22) - Mon 04 Aug 2014
I love your story so far.
Also, how is it that kagome knows about the scene with izayoi and shishinki? Wasnt she thrown into the river before this scene happened
or is it that someone is giving her this image?
If you missed episode 3 of Sailor Moon Crystal you can watch it on youtube. Nice chapter, keep it coming
awesome XD XD XD
now i thought insert-generic-master character was gone
Your welcome Margarida1, just keep the chapters, hopefully you will get a lot reviews! Sailor Moon new anime has already aired two episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. Lovely chapter, keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
OMG!! That has to the the best ending. What are they going to say and do to kagome. What's going to happen to the guard who apparently didn't know that kagome was one of his pups. Wjats kagome going to do!! Oh my god the questions I have. Please put the next chapter up soon
i hope kagome will join the torture. i love good cop bad cop
Cool, keep it coming.
Sailor Moon new anime is starting on July 5. Great, keep it coming.
What Makes A Dad
God took the strength of a mountain, The majesty of a tree, The warmth of a summer run, The calm of a quiet sea, The generous soul of nature, The comforting arm of night, The wisdom of the ages, The power of the eagle's flight, The joy of a morning in spring, The faith of a mustard seed, The patience of eternity, The depth of a family need, Then God combined these qualities, When there was nothing more to add, He knew His masterpiece was complete, And so, He called it...Dad.
Happy Father's Day!
I love the intro to the story, seems like it will be a great fic.
Akita (Chapter 17) - Tue 10 Jun 2014
Lovin it!
How about your first review from your beta? :3 I believe you've earned many times over with this wonderful story!
I have always been amazed by a non native speaker trying his or her hand at writing in a language not their first as I don't know any language other than my own let alone read and write in another. I'm told it's hard enough to learn to speak another language but even more difficult to learn to read and write in it. So for that alone, I am proud of you, Ana :)
At first, you needed extensive beta help, but I can honestly say, you have made a HUGE improvement in not only your grammar and tense jumping, but also your writing! I know you worry I get tired of helping you, but with your dedication and willingness to strive to learn and improve just encourages me more to help you.
I greatly enjoy this story, the plot and character developement! From the start, I knew this story had potential and you have not dissappointed! Wonderful job so far, babygirl <3 You have me curious to keep finding out what will happen next.
Poor Sesshomaru! lol He desires Kagome so much, so completely, and so intensely, it's no wonder he is having such a difficult time in restraining himself around her. And he's not alone in his lust, for Kagome is attracted to him, but poor girl, she doesn't understand her feelings for a complete stranger and she is already struggling to adapt to her new life.
Love the connection, the bond between Aimee and Kagome. Tis so cute :3
Keep up the awesome work! And never even entertain the thought of never finishing this fic because as your beta and fan, I will so totally nag you mercelessly lol And that's a promise!
Keep it up, keep it coming.
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