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Honeyque28 (Chapter 20) - Tue 06 Sep 2022

Sad but interesting story. I hate what Sesshomaru did but I kinda get it to. I just really hope both women find peace with their youkai children at least. Stay safe and happy Labor day!


Esso Bluebear (Chapter 6) - Fri 25 Sep 2020

Hellllllooooo!!!! Girlfriend this fic is fucking amazing!!! This chapter was so heart wrenching. Dear lord I hope you complete this fic with a super happy ending for our beloved couple. SESSKAG FOR LIFE!!!!


misty (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Jul 2020

will you be continuing this? 


Birdy (Chapter 16) - Mon 21 Oct 2019

I have to say this is a very interesting and disturbing story. While I admire your passion for your storyline, I'm a little disappointed on how weak, selfish, childish and impossible Kagome is being. I understand that something terrible has happened to her but in my opinion that doesn't give her the right to act so stupid and irresponsible. Like the incident with Sango, she selfishly kept pushing Sango to escape with her and get back to Inuyasha, even knowing the warnings Sango gave her. She seems to get herself in situations where she expects people to listen to her without question, and not care about the consequences of her actions. Now Sango (as well as Shippo and Miroku) is suffering because of Kagome selfishness and stupidity. Sesshomaru is impossible in this story as well. Thinking that his actions are right and believing that forcing Kagome into this mating, impregnating her and having her submit to him is just going to make her forgive and forget the situation and be loving, loyal and obedien to him. But Then again he lives in the feudal era and back in those times women were seen as tools and nothing more. This is just my opinion, you write your story however you want it. 

 

I do hope that you haven forgotten this story and will update it soon. I've noticed that it's been three years since you've last updated a chapter. Life does throw us some unexpected things but I hope that it doesn't keep you away forever. I sure there's a lot of fans that are dying to see what happens next and are hoping that Sesshomaru pays for what he's done.


Kayla (Chapter 7) - Sat 01 Jun 2019

This story had me angry the majority of the time.... but I continued lol


Justice (Chapter 20) - Mon 17 Dec 2018

please update soon! I really want to know what’s going to happen with Kagome! Will she give in and fall in love? Or will she forever hate the dog demon lord? 


Desiree Nickels (Chapter 20) - Fri 16 Feb 2018

Please update your story's 


LadyoftheLemons (Chapter 20) - Tue 12 Dec 2017

Hope you keep going on this please please


zonegirl (Chapter 20) - Fri 17 Nov 2017

I love it. I prefer to dark history, it's better. Kagome is a strong woman, and Sessh is a very complicated. But, it's a amazing curse in this fanfic. 


LibraCourt (Chapter 20) - Sat 26 Aug 2017

Update? 


Jcdbunny (Chapter 10) - Tue 16 May 2017

love the soft side sesshomaru has for kagome 


LibraCourt (Chapter 20) - Mon 19 Dec 2016

uum, update? 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 20) - Wed 24 Aug 2016

I had just started reading this story a few days ago and kept going up until this chapter. You are a good writer and the chapters are well written but I have to agree with the reviewer named Malaya. I have read some dark S/K stories and I must say this one takes the cake. Sessho claims all he wants from Kagome is her love how does he think she will feel about him when she eventually finds out about what he did to Sango and the rest of her friends.

He is beyond forgiveness and love from her. There will most likely be no happy ending for them or anyone else in this story. I love your writing but I cannot read this one any further.

This is not a flame or anything like that, it is just my own opinion. I highly respect you as a writer and I will read any story that you may post as long as it is not this dark.


Malayah (Chapter 20) - Wed 24 Aug 2016

Some people really love this story but after the most recent chapter I can not bare to continue to read this. In most stories Sesshomaru is cold and sometimes even losses control over his beast. But in this story he is completely deranged and psychotic. Although Sesshomaru is thought to be highly intelligent, he isn't even smart in this fic. The Sess I know would have at least thought of the effects that his choices have on Kagome. Someone said that maybe Kagome will develop Stockholm syndrome and fall in love with Sess but I highly doubt that. Sending Sango to a whore house and letting her be abused, imprisoning Miroku, plotting to kill Inuyasha, and completely disregarding Shippo. He even lets his mother treat her like crap... Normally people who develop Stockholm syndrome are treat way better which causes their mind to be tricked into trusting, and 'loving' their captor. Its literally as if he doesn't care about Kagome. He has not one redeeming quality. After everything that has happened I'm shocked that she hasn't said forget the kids committed suicide just to be spared the agony even for a moment. (Because I know he would bring her back to life). There is not even one ounce of hope.  Just a series of unfortunate depressing events. Sesshomaru is the main character and has shown no progression or growth. 

This definitely is a dark fic but like dark chocolate is too dark for me. I need a little bit of hope for a happy ending and this fic makes my heart hurt so so much. I do apologize for my worlds and do not mean to sound harsh. You are a great writer my dear. I wish you the best! 


Natalia (Chapter 18) - Tue 23 Aug 2016

a highly disturbing piece. i read because i was curious and the synopsis was catching but.. sorry for being blunt i don't like it. of course its only my opinion and its noot necesasrily true other like it i am sure but honestly? sesshoumaru is more deranged, obsesed. i am sure in canon he is not like this, maybe i am reading bad in his character but he seems cold yes and somehow cruel but not emotionaly deranged. the characters only are crule and again deranged? i see no character gowth or progress? and where is the shine of hope? i am sure you wanted a dark piece but its too dark not everyone can bear to read the characters  it i will definetely not. in rest i apologize for my words and wish you good luck despite everything. hope your muse will suport you and you will find your readers but be careful, despite everything a positive detail hope should be present otherwise we lose the wish to read further. thx again anhd good luck and again my opinion isnt necesasrily true, everyone can have his one. good luck!


Koree (Chapter 20) - Sun 21 Aug 2016

Omg :/ poor Sango i feel so bad & poor Kags ! Akane is getting worse & worse


Sparkle (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Aug 2016

I started reading because I was looking for something new. I must say dark fics are not my thing and I now recognize that. Although well written this story make me want to throat punch some characters for their actions. Sometimes it makes me feel hopeless about the current situation in the story. If that is what you are going for in the story then you have succeeded. Not sure if I can stick around for the ending though, I think I need something happier.


Somiant (Chapter 20) - Tue 16 Aug 2016

 

 

 

First of all thank you for taking the time to write and share your stories with us “fans”. I love the natural way your writing style is. I can picture all characters in details with how you portrait them, which is awesome and very entertaining (I just wish I can draw). You know after a long day at work, family duties and more , reading at night or during my commute is really something. Thanks again: D.

Now about the story, there are so many issues to cover and go though for Kagome to understand demon’s culture. I am not giving an excuse for Sesshomaru actions toward her or her friends but he is not human and that is the difference. Sesshomaru is trying to sue his guiltiness but in reality he doesn’t have a clue how to deal with a human female, and specially one that he is in love with “Killing Perfection” there. Kagome needs to be over Inuyasha, she was daydreaming of marry him but it doesn’t seem that he saw it that way with her. So she will have to wake up from that broken dream. Akane oh dear she is a case but I think unknowingly to her, she will be helping Kagome to understand Sesshoramu as a demon (hehe that I wish). Atsuko a mother figure clearly needed in all that hardship going on. I wish Kagome could open up a bit more with her because she might be the one to make her reason in all this mess.  Sango, I feel sorry for her and I wonder if the baby is from her first client, maybe. I hope someone can help her out soon. Demon punishment there extreme but again they are demons. I was so happy to see an update and I wish I can read a new chapter soon , but no rush …we all have real lives. 


barb (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Aug 2016

I actually kind of hope she does retreat into herself mentally and only subjugation makes her move but even then, that would be unsatisfying to sessh cause shes a puppet and not really there.

 

 I want it so that not even her body responds to him anymore and he finds himself screwing an inanimate, silent object. Like a comatose person except she's alive in her mind and in a happier, beautiful place. Ocasionally checking on the outside world as if through a monitor/window but.....detached. Yeah the puppies will miss her but her maids can put them on her to nurse...that part of her will still respond. 

I realize a version like this would be very hard to write but i would love to see how sesshy fixes it or if he even could fix it.

 


Sesshoumaru'sPriestess (Chapter 20) - Mon 15 Aug 2016

Poor Kagome. I hope that they all get what is coming to them and she make Sess PAY dearly for what he has done. He deserves pain and suffering for what he did to Sango and her as well as Miroku.


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