An interesting way to start the story. I like it how you made his feelings slowly growing more and more, to the point where he finally realized the depth of his feelings. :)
I simply love the addition of the elves into the story...from the very beginning I really liked how Elathaneus was such a dear friend to Seshoumaru; it made him seem less of the icy prince we know him to be. And I love the bond that Sesshoumaru and Kagome are building together; it is adorable and you can sense the true loyal feelings they have for one another. The fact that Kagome will meet the elves and Elathaneus will protect his friend's loved ones in the same way Sesshoumaru has done for him is a nice concept...how Elathaneus has been waiting for Sesshoumaru to find his mate so he can be happy is so touching...they are true friends and that is rarely seen in anything involving The Lord of the West! Please update when you are able....you know how I love this story!! ^_^
Nice, keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Prayer (Chapter 5) - Tue 17 Sep 2013
Oh, you are deliciously evil...
I will always be disappointed in my boyfriends from now on. No one could give something so sweet, nice and kind, lovely and romantic.....
An elflord? I so do love elves. *chuckles*
I had a good laugh at Inuyasha's hilarious stunts over the years.
His gifts sound very beautiful as well. I would have liked to see them drawn.
Heh, so he does have a close childhood friend. Unexpectant, but pleasant nonetheless. XD
A real man is confident enough to compliment the woman he loves *nods*
A traditional courting. huh? I somehow expected this from Sesshoumaru. XD
A sweet beginning to what seems to be a romantic tale of awkwardness and fluff. XD
Do your best, Sesshoumaru!
Oh my good golly gosh!! This story has become such a favorite of mine, for the simple fact that it is magnificence in word form. The detail, writing style, and use of language are truly a stroke of genious...but as always, you already know how fond I am of your work. I love each and every update more than the last, and ask that you continue to honor me with the privlege to read them. I anxiously await the next installment!! ^_^
Annie (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Sep 2013
I am loving this love story. I am starting to cry. Such beautiful details about the courting gifts. This is a masterpiece.
Beautiful as always...I am curious for the next chapter and what this special kimono will look like...I am sure it will be lovely just like Kagome. This story is just wonderful and I greatly enjoy reading it...but you already know that! ^_^
Liking it, keep it coming.
Living it, keep it coming.
Great story so far. I can't wait to read more. :)
its great. they're all great. theyre not unbelievable long, but they all cover what theyre supposed to. i love 'em and please continue. :)
love this...
Keep it coming.
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