Very well though out plot so far. a
Cant wait for the next installment!
Great chapter, keep it coming.
wow this is super long chapters!
thanks for the update! faving you
Tiegrsi (Chapter 3) - Wed 11 Sep 2013
I love this story so far! Very well written and everyone seems to be in character. I like that your Sesshomaru is not a fluffy version - that he IS demon-like. Can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
Liking it, keep it coming.
Latoya (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Sep 2013
| Great first chapter, a few grammer errors but it did not ruine the flow of the chapter. You did a great job , I look forward to reading more.
Keep it coming.
nicole (Chapter 1) - Fri 30 Aug 2013
that my child hit the spot such an orgasming cliff hanger what happened next
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
Love how descriptive your story is cant wait for the next update!
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