| I love it! Update soon please!
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Sep 2008
| All in all, very well done. You convey the emotion perfectly. Very well constructed, interesting story line, well thought out. Nice piece of work!
(Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Sep 2008
| I got a comment from Shiori_Baka that I feel I should respond to. First of all, thank you for questioning that! this story has been sitting on a-single-spark for almost a year now, and before I posted it on here, I did some editing and added the flashbacks. This caused the time frame of their relationship to become...well...messed up frankly. I'm sorry for the confusion. It was 6 in the morning when I edited it. Thank you again for bringing this to my attention! Also, thank you all for reading and leaving a review. I do believe I will be adding a sequel, so I hope you read that as well. :D Thanks again! All my love - Akumi
| DEFINATELY DESERVES A CONTINUATION! Please continue it! I thought it should be continued the first time I read it on either spark or fan fiction. LOVE THE STORY!
| I love your story. I would love to see it continue. PLEASE!!!!
tina (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Sep 2008
| wow !!! thank you so very much for posting it , you have no idea how this helped me somethings into perspective for my life and how its going right now thank you very much
| Wow! You really brought out the emotions there. The whole piece was heart-wrenching, and I started crying half-way through. Please continue!
jASMINE (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Sep 2008
| PLEASE CONTINUE IT PLZ
Shiori_Baka (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Sep 2008
| i like this story and you should continue if you want but you kept giving differnt times it went from knowing each other for 4 years to being together for 6 or 5 and it kept changing so just read it over and make sure years match up
FleetingDream (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Sep 2008
| I say continue, it was good and it needs more. I really liked it you in no way, shape or form should leave it as it is. Well anyway good job, you get a cookie :-)
FleetingDream (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Sep 2008
| I say continue, it was good and it needs more. I really liked it you in no way, shape or form should leave it as it is. Well anyway good job, you get a cookie :-)
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Sep 2008
| what it ended???WHAT!?!?! If you continue i will read it!!! Beautiful though! Great job!
| I would love for you to continue it. Please do! It needs more!!
| Wow, I really love this story! It's very well written, too. I think you should definately continue it. It's such a sweet but sad story. Amazing job!
ksks (Chapter 1) - Sat 13 Sep 2008
| plz continue this fic its very well written i would luv to see a continuation
| A lot of feeling this story. *sigh* You must learn to live w/ your regrets I guess.
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