Reviews for The One by Luna C.

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Anonymous (Chapter 25) - Wed 20 Nov 2013

Finally a date...yeah.


s_spina (Chapter 25) - Wed 20 Nov 2013

the prey has been hook!!!


Ankita (Chapter 25) - Wed 20 Nov 2013

OMG can't wait for the next chapter please update soonnnn ... pleaseeeeeeeeeee


Loveyaa (Chapter 24) - Sat 09 Nov 2013

It must be fate working in her favor. I'm surprised she just didn't put in a work order for her office and have Sesshoumaru come to "fix" whatever it was. Everybody and their plans. I wonder whose will work out and if Sesshoumaru will put up with it. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


consuelo marquez (Chapter 24) - Sat 09 Nov 2013

*girly squeal*   *flails*


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 24) - Fri 08 Nov 2013

 More, keep it coming. 


pclark (Chapter 2) - Fri 08 Nov 2013

I have a question, how do you know my husband? He is a maintance engineer, he is very quite and shy, it took him almost a year to ask me out, then another year to ask me to marry him. Everything that you have just describrd about Sesshomaru is exactly like my husband.


s_spina (Chapter 24) - Fri 08 Nov 2013

Ahahahah Kagome is on The prowl  

beware silverhaired inuyoukai named Sesshoumaru 


Chopsticks (Chapter 24) - Thu 07 Nov 2013

omgsh I love this story it has me hooked! it makes my day to get a new chapter! I love that Kagome is pursuing him.


s_spina (Chapter 24) - Thu 07 Nov 2013

ohh pooor poor Sesshoumaru..NOT

ahahahahah feel the power of a woman on the hunt!

 

 


Serena (Chapter 24) - Thu 07 Nov 2013

i can think of a few thing i would like to happen in that elevator >:))) 


s_spina (Chapter 23) - Tue 29 Oct 2013

... sesshoumaru will be the hunted :)

I approve!


darksilvercloud (Chapter 23) - Tue 29 Oct 2013

stalker kagome. hehe~


Jaken-sama (Chapter 23) - Tue 29 Oct 2013

I looooovee this fic... Update more or feel the wrath of my nintoujou


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 23) - Mon 28 Oct 2013

Great, keep it coming,


Stella Mira (Chapter 22) - Fri 25 Oct 2013

Koga, Koga... I can't even find the words to tell you how wrong you are. Not that you'd get it anyway even if I did phrase it logically....

I'm looking forward to Kagome meeting her angel again. *chuckles*

Tanku for the updates, Luna!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 22) - Fri 25 Oct 2013

Keep it coming.


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 22) - Thu 24 Oct 2013

uh oh! Koga it's ready for attack. he just needs the 'perfect' plan


Night Wraith (Chapter 22) - Thu 24 Oct 2013

I like the story concept but the story is dragging for me.  Out of 22 chapters, less than five have to do with Seshomaru and Kagome together. It wouldn't be so bad if the points of views were from Seshomaru or Kagome but there's too much third person view who really don't have anything to do with the story other than be an annoyance and distract from the main story line.

The writing is good but there is too much filler and not enough meat and too much wait in between posting. I was excited to see Kagome moving forward to meet Seshomaru again only to be disappoint with and update on obsessive Koga.  That's saying a lot because I generally like Koga as a character.


KieraTDG (Chapter 1) - Thu 24 Oct 2013

i think this is a great start to a new beginning:-)


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