loved the fanfic..........cant wait to see more great sess/kag stoties from you.................keep the fanfics coming.........................................................tdaniel
In chapter 2 i just couldn't help but notise the rather huge math error.
First it is stated that she has a barrier extending 4 miles from the well, then later she tells Inu that everything within 16 miles of the well is hers followed by some horrible math. If it is everything witin 16 miles of the well that would be the same as taking a string that is 16 miles long, pinning it at the well and streaching it out then use it to draw a circle around the well.
As she explain it to Inu efter it is 4 miles in all directions, meaning everything within 4 miles of the well, not 16.
Oh my goodness gracious, I realized I read this and did not review....and it is in my favorite stories as well....shame on me...anywho, I have read (I believe) all of your fanfics...that being said, I think I have dubbed this my favorite...the fact that Kagome is actually a demoness and hiding this fact from her compaions, including Sesshoumaru is brilliant...and Inuyahsa's turn around near the end is priceless....and anyone who knows me is aware of the fact that Inuyasha and I, well, we DO NOT get along...and I actually liked and respected him in the end...I think this is very well written, and the ideas are very unique...I enjoy everything you write...keep them coming, and I hope that when I get my fanfic out there finally, it is as flawless as yours!!
Ylva (Chapter 10) - Mon 02 Sep 2013
It was a wonderful story, loved every second of it
I love your story!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next one
I loved your story! I cant believe tis is the first one you finished. Keep writing!
This was a great story!!!! Keep up the great work!!!
TKE (Chapter 10) - Tue 27 Aug 2013
That was a beautiful story!!
EXCITMENT! i love it! and all those pup names O_O my goodness! part of me id kinda hope that Sess's grandpupps, or great grands? pranked Hojo b/c he's all goo-goo over their grandma! that would be awesome!
The story was awesome and I enjoyed.
tonya (Chapter 10) - Mon 26 Aug 2013
loved it!
well I'm sorroy that i didnt review every chapter but this is a VERY interesing fic! i cant wait to see the end!
tonya (Chapter 9) - Tue 20 Aug 2013
i love this story! awesome!
I read this story on fanfiction, it's a great story. Keep it coming.
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