NICE! This is really begging for another chapter. Why he has white hair (since it is in modern times), why she needs protecting, and how is he going to answer all her questions. LOVE you writing style, keep up the great work!
Nilee1 (Chapter 1) - Sat 10 Aug 2013
please say that there will be more
This seems like it's just starting.
This intriguing story was very good. Will you be continuing it?
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