Ah, a delightful, happy ending for ... most of them anyway. XD
I'm glad the responsible ones for this got put to jail. Kagome suffered a lot because of their thoughtless actions. >.>
I enjoyed this unique story, Kaoru-chan! Well done! :)
Come it, keep it coming.
The possession seems to be progressing at a rapid pace if Naraku is able to overpower Kagome's mind and take over her body. Sesshoumary better hurry and do whatever he has planned to seal him again or exterminate him in some way 'cause Kagome will be in huge trouble soon.
I enjoyed this chapter. Not sucky in my opinion, it was informative. :)
Poor Miroku ended up being the mediator. XD
Riccie4 (Chapter 2) - Sun 11 Aug 2013
This is turning out awesome, it's like I'm watching a movie while reading it!! Your imagery is wonderful, keep up the good work!!
Happy writing ^_^ ,
- Riccie4
I really like all this background info on the Tachibana house. Nice portrayals and new exciting characters added to the mix! Th eplot thickens and I'm looking forward to new developments! Well done, Kaoru-chan!
Inuyasha will forever be the oblivious, manipulated hanyou - be it by love or evil - won't he? *shakes head*
Very good use of the prompt, too! Keep up the great work. :)
Keep it coming.
mango (Chapter 2) - Fri 09 Aug 2013
I'm really interested to see where you take this story! I like the idea you have going and look forward to reading more! Great job you're doing on this one!
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
A very interesting concept, Kaoru-chan! To the rest of the world Kagome might seem like a mentally unstable person, but she is in fact possesed by an evil spirit. I like this theory a lot. Plus, you know I love AU stories and this one looks like a very promising one! Lovely use of the prompt, too!
I'm looking forward to more chapters. :)
Riccie4 (Chapter 1) - Sat 03 Aug 2013
I think you are doing a great job so far, I can't wait to see what you have in store! Don't feel bad about your story it looks like everything is in the right place. My minor is psychology and the way you are putting it into the story is fine so far.
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