I loved the story. The pickup lines had me laughing so hard. I loved it all.
Howdy!
Yeah, I'm one of those very infrequent reviewers - if I can find nothing worth saying, or if it's been years since an author has been online on a site, I don't say anything. That's not to say that I only review when I like something...or not, as the case may be. I respond to those moments of a story that are interesting, different, or unique.
This story, "Mother's Son Knows Best", is funny and has a perfect balance of the happier emotions. No great tragedies, no deep angst. While those darker things can be fun to read, from time to time, they are best used like any spice - enough to flavor, not enough to overcome.
I was greatly impressed with the skill you used in verbally sketching your characters. And the ease with which you advanced your story. It was a delightful read.
Thank you.
Eliona (Chapter 1) - Sun 30 Mar 2014
This was so cute <3 I loved the cheesy pick up lines! hahaha xD
Lorena (Chapter 1) - Fri 14 Feb 2014
I love this story. I like how there is that hope that things would turn out this way had the events after Naraku play out that way. <3 to read any future KagSess stories with shippo as a good backbone to Kagome
This has got to be my FAVORITE Sess/Kag YET! I loved the humor and the contestants (and would so have mated the monkey). It was sweet, and left me feeling giddy from the feels and the correct spellings and grammar. THANK YOU FOR HAVING CORRECT SPELLING AND GRAMMAR!
Jc (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 Nov 2013
More please! This was lovely! I wish it could keep coming ^^,
Keep it up! =]
Fluffy (Chapter 1) - Fri 08 Nov 2013
I LIKE IT :D the monkey was my favorite of the suitors then the horse lol
that was wonderful. :-) lol i especially love how Shippo was in on it the whole time. lol
ruth (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Aug 2013
Love it! I love all your stories :D, please please please continue.....thank you :D
It was adorable and I am so glad you wrote it. I can imagine Shippo's face everytime he faced a new "suitor" for his mother's attentions. I wish there was more!
You did! I laughed! And it was romantic and sweet :)
Thanks for writing!
Very nice, but I think the paragraphs should have been broken up for better reading. I hope you are making a chapter 2.
Sheila (Chapter 1) - Wed 24 Jul 2013
So cute! Love your stories.
This was absoultly AWEEE-SOOMMME~!!!
Love it.
TKE (Chapter 1) - Wed 24 Jul 2013
*squeels* LOVE IT!!!!!
Bahahaha!!! "Have at her. I'm done." XDDD Shippo's exasperated tone...poor kit!!!
Cute and funny, Nico! I loved it!!
Plus, adult Shippou needs to find himself a woman and be this silly! I just crack up at this thought!
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