This story is such a tease! Left me wondering what happens next...
Holy hell, woman! That was one hot piece of... umm... well... It was a very hot piece! (waggles eyebrows like Miroku).
Too bad it's only a one shot. I could totally see it continued as you delve into what's really going on with Inu (probably Kikyou, but THAT plot is so overused anymore).
As always your works are pieces of art. Even the PWP ^-^
Wow, very hot! Great job ;)
This was great.
While it was *very* well written and I envy your way with words, there was something very off about Kagome's character for me. It was hard for me to visualize Kagome in such a promiscuous role. I still loved the story and think you did a great job. I just think perhaps Kagome could have been less OOC. I think there is something about portraying innocence in her that adds to her appeal in stories like this. Still, great job. It was definitely well worth the read.
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