This story has SO much potential. But it's so hard to read. There is hardly any dialogue and the main characters are fairly OOC a lot of the time. I think this story would be an AMAMZING read if It had a little more planning and structure, and PLEASE more dialogue!! You're on the right track friend. Keep working toward your goal :)

The fact that he can be with this woman sexually makes me feel ill. 

Oh my gosh I am sooooo happy! This has got to be the best piece of writing I have ever read! It sucked me in and I literally didn't put it down until I finished it. This is amazing! Holy crap this is a fantastic fanfiction I wish it were a real book I could carry around. Holy crap. I think I'm in shock.

Oh my gosh I am sooooo happy! This has got to be the best piece of writing I have ever read! It sucked me in and I literally didn't put it down until I finished it. This is amazing! Holy crap this is a fantastic fanfiction I wish it were a real book I could carry around. Holy crap. I think I'm in shock.

Oh my gosh I am sooooo happy! This has got to be the best piece of writing I have ever read! It sucked me in and I literally didn't put it down until I finished it. This is amazing! Holy crap this is a fantastic fanfiction I wish it were a real book I could carry around. Holy crap. I think I'm in shock.

You know my dear author, this is one of those tales that I am extremely grateful it’s actually completed when I started it. The Tension, the feelings... slow burn... dammit. if I were to wait between chapters I am positive frustration would‘ve had killed me. It’s just so angsty and I love it but also hate it. This that you have here, your creation is a masterpiec. I am very glad and very grateful that youchoose to share this gift, that is your talent, with us. Thank you so very very much.

I'm more than a little disgusted with Sesshomaru in recent chapters: he told and trusted his children with his plans but not his mate?!? WTF?!?

Otherwise, I am enjoying the story very much. You've done an amazing job world building. You've also done a fantastic job with your OCs; I had a moment of sympathy for Seira when her time came.

there are no words to truly describe how i feel about reading this story..... it had me on the edge of my seat and actually crying because of the intensity of the raw emotion that you have poored into this. I was truly captivated by this amazing piece of art that you named Bent. I look forward to reading more from you and applaud you obvious talent.

LOVED IT!!!! Thank you for writing SUCH an incredible story. Definetly going to read it again!!!!

Wonderful story.  I liked seeing how Sesshomaru made a lot of mistakes over the course of years.  And while Kagome made mistakes too, she held to her convictions of her beliefs especially with how she knew the future would be.  Thank you for writing this story, and I look forward to reading your other stories. :)

Such. a beautiful story .. Thank u for sharing

this story was long and it took me several days to finish it. when i did reach the end of this fanfic all i could do was feel the emotions it took to write a story like this. if anyone has an ounce of feeling they would fall in love by the end of it. in all my readings of fanfics this is one that i will put on my favorites list. you wrote something that i was glad i took the time to read. if sesshoumaru sama were real i would love to meet him just once. i for sure would not have a chance with him, but i would love to say "hello" to him just once and get an autograhph. if you decide to write another epic story like this i would definately read it. GREAT writing and i look forward to more. c'ya'

Greeting, i really am amzed of your story and i would like to congratulate you for a very beautiful and well crafted one, most of us known that usually stories created in almost all of the fanfiction sites were always short stories and most of it had been lef unfinished by the writers living  the reader hanging ion prospective. but this is the first story i came along  longer than i expected and very well thought and planned about. thank you for sharing your stories in public , i wish you will create more as i am going to follow every bit of your work. congratulations for a story well done..i am really a sess/kag pairing follower

I know it's supposed to be a drama, but Sesshomaru is smarter than this. However I am enjoying the story. 

This was such a good story. Such wonderful and well thought out details.

Story was interesting - a lot of political plots and such.

But I am having trouble imaging Sesshomaru going through some of that.
I don't think Kagome would step aside for a hime to marry her husband and mate. I think Kagome - with all the historical and myth books, she'd figure out a way to alter the past of no youkai.

Also, I am not sure how a spell could erase Sesshomaru's memories. He's very powerful. He's a Daiyoukai which is extremely powerful - so how could a simple spell overpower him?

Also, I don't think there'd be much to keep him away from his mate. If killing needed to be done, he'd do it.

But overall, it was a good story, very different!

Ms I am so glad that the story had a happy ending in spite of all the drama. Sorry for not reviewing more often because this was a great fic. I thoroughly enjoyed Bent. I can tell that you put a lot of thought into your plot and twists, and also your writing has improved tremendously. I am grateful to you for writing this so that I could read a long fantastic fic.

I am so pleased that Sessh finally got rid of that crazed wife of his. I really hope that he and Kags can put the past behind them and start over, they need their lives back.

Well the ending was a bit strange and brutal. All those years apart, was it really necessary? And what of the future? We have no reassurance. Did the children marry? would Sesshomaru maybe give half the kingdom to his son etc. So many questions

Im reviewing as much as possible because you deserve it!! This story, so far, is epic, beyond proportions. I mean wow this chapter had me going wow. She totally turned n changed her mind. Im not giving any spoiler, but wowwwww