Love how the relationship progressed. 

Well. I'm glad that someone asked about this in the forum. Usually I can't stand first person, but your Kagome and writing was so natural that I nearly forgot about it. I think the "I hate peope. Just kidding!" did it. 

It was a nice build up and a perfectly fine lemon lol. The way you wrote it was natural and didn't include the many epithets for "member" if ya know what I mean. Good job. 

Awesome!!!!

enjoyable story

Liked how easy it was for them to just get used to each other then slowly move forward to something more lol

dont usually like 1st person stories but u did good hun

Beautifully Written! I was captivated!

I have to say that I truly enjoyed it.  I read SesshxKag lemon stories so often and in my opinion they are just as you said; Sesshoumaru completely changes after he meets Kagome and totally steps out of his usual character.  That doesn't make the other stories bad, as I have quite enjoyed them, however it is refreshing for someone to truly care about the gradual progression of his feelings rather than having him act in a way he never would under normal circumstances.  To me, that makes for a much better storyline don't you?  Anyway, I did fully appreciate this oneshot and think you are indeed cut out to write lemons...it was a job well done!

You are DEFINITELY CUT OUT FOR LEMONS. That has to be one of the better lemons I've ever read. I loved it, I only wish it wasn't a one shot D:.

Good story!  I like that Kagome was the initiator 'til the end.

Very good!! I loved how it gradually played out to this great ending.. Those are the best types of stories for me

Ah, lemons.  For a first time, it turned out well.  I hope that's not the end of the story.  I missed if this was a one shot or chapterful.

I absoultely lOVED this........YOU NEED to continue

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story Raythe!  Usually, I'm not a fan of first person POV stories because they have a tendency of becoming a monologue of Kagome's thoughts instead of an actual story, but the way you wrote No Going Back was a well-balanced blend of storytelling and a clear insight into Kagome's mind.  And I really enjoyed the gradual buildup of their relationship.  I tend to avoid oneshots because I'm almost always left wanting more from the story, but I didn't get that feeling with this story.  No Going Back is a well thought out story that covers all the necessary bases of a cohesive story, and it has sense of sincerity that I really enjoyed.  You are more than cut out to write lemons ma'am and I greatly look forward to seeing much more from you in the future.  I must say, I am SO grateful that you didn't change Sesshomaru's personality. I love how everything about Kagome and Sesshomaru is contradiction that shouldn't work together, but they do and I appreciate that you kept that the same.

The lemon was good.  It also had your own flair to it.  But at times during it, you caused some of their actions to seem pov.  It was as if kagome is talking about what's happening from her pov as if from a memory, not present tense. The only time it seemed to snap back to reality was when sesshomaru would speak or do something on his own. Like when he asked kagome if she's okay. The end of the lemon had that pov feel to it too. The end of a lemon is usually a shouting contest. The female is loud and shrill while the male inu youkai is growling deeply but loudly, sometimes roaring his conquest.

 All in all, I liked your work alot. I didn't mind it being long because how else were you going to tell the story without them suddenly falling in love. Keep writing and I look forward to your next lemon. 

I really liked this story. The pace was really good, and the lemon at the end was completely juicy.

Great job!

~Starfyre

Wow! Awesome job!! I loved it, perfect set up with the background and the build up to the romance and a hot, spicy lemon to top it off! I certainly hope to read similar work from you in the future! 

Oh and you write the characters very well. It's perfectly balanced!

My dear, you did an excellent job!  I like the build up to their relationships change.  It just kept evolving until it finally became a romance.  Your language was very classy, keeping the aura of romance rather than lust.  I enjoyed it very much.  Very well done!

This story was wonderfully written!  It is very original, and from when I myself was eighteen and starting to live on my own and beggining new relationships, it is very accurate. This was was great story, and I cannot wait to read more of your works.

~Sandreline

I love your story!!! its beautifully written and i agree all the way ob how u used the tine frame. i'm the same as well, thou its fun to read Sesshomaru change so quickly after meeting Kagome i much perfer the way u did it. Sesshomaru is diff in character. wonderful job on the lemon too very tasteful.