please if your not to busy would u compelet this storry i love it i keep reading the same two chapters hoping for move
Nice, are you going to continue it? I really like where it's going. So the breakup waasn't hard for Sesshoumaru at all really? He only just cared for her back then? That's all I'm really confused about, or did he jsut fool himself like with what he did about her wanting to end it as well?
Clover_babe (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 Oct 2008
| *sigh*
of course Sessho wants to concentrate on his future and break all things off that dont deal with it.
i just hope that Sessho will finally realize that its not healthy to do that. People need people. we need to love and live. so hopefully he'll figure that out soon. or else Rin will just have to settle with the fact that she will never know her father.
please update ASAP. i;m excited to read the rest.
:D
Connie (Chapter 2) - Thu 25 Sep 2008
| ooh im really interested! lols. i cant wait for all the drama to enfold! whees!
| oh yeah....the beast knows! wonder if he can beat up his more civilized half....how on earth did Inuyasha add to Kaggy's home w/o his dad knowing!? I mean I highly doubt that he was given THAT much of an allowence....Rin sounds SO ADORABLE!
Nobody (Chapter 2) - Thu 25 Sep 2008
| yayayya i'm gla you continued!
slayer0427 (Chapter 2) - Thu 25 Sep 2008
| I like you flow keep it coming. Aaww rin seems so cute!!!!
| I like the flow of your story. keep up the good work.
babygirl (Chapter 1) - Thu 25 Sep 2008
| This story is great! It is just the kind fanfic i like to read. Please update soon and keep up the good work!
babygirl (Chapter 1) - Thu 25 Sep 2008
| This story is great! It is just the kind fanfic i like to read. Please update soon and keep up the good work!
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Sep 2008
| I enjoyed this... it's a great beginning with potential to be something amazing. Keep up the good work and I look forward to learning about Kagome's decisions in regards to the child she carries. :P
wawa (Chapter 1) - Tue 09 Sep 2008
| Great start. I look forward to reading more.
LadySafire (Chapter 1) - Tue 09 Sep 2008
| Its a wonderful beginning! I like it very much. Please update it soon!
| I like your new style, but I haven't read anything else of yours yet so I have no base to say which style works better for you. Your flow is good, easy to read, and a tight storyline that has a lot of potential. I can't wait to read more.
| WTHECK! man is Fluffy a stuck up...argh...he decided it was best FOR HER did he!*rages and rants* does his father know Kagome? as just Inuyasha's friend? if he learns about the pregnancy he'll be spitting mad but I bet Kaggy could get him to not tell Sesshomaru.....but Fluffy might wonder WHY his dad's being so much more cold to him. wow...is the baby gonna be Rin? or is it going to be named something else? and I wonder if it'll be a full youkai...is Kagome a miko? I'm hoping Inuyasha will stick with his friend....and keep his mouth shut.....PLEASE UPDATE SOON! and give SESSY A SLICE OF HUMBLE PIE SOON! but not at Kaggy or the puppy's expense please.
Kambri_Jade (Chapter 1) - Mon 08 Sep 2008
| Wow! I can't wait to see what happens next with this story. I think you've got a great plot going, keep it up! Please update ASAP ;D
| I like the essay style - it flows well.
| wow..that was awesome..I cant wait for the next chapter..awesome work
ur name (Chapter 1) - Mon 08 Sep 2008
| very nice very nice
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