I am thoroughly enjoying this story; it's funny and original making for refeshing reading and I hope that you update very soon!
I think you've broken my brain.
So our wonderful, almost-too-sexy-for-words, beautiful Sesshoumaru, has taken Kagome's first kiss AND orgasm in the same hour?!
Woah he moves fast.
Oh gosh! It's getting steamy in here! Open the windows- I can't breathe!!!
Kagome, you're being so very brave... and naughty.
It's a wonder that Sessh can resist at all.
I do love your characterisation of Kags- it's true to how I interpret her. LMAO.
Dead Space 2 is hard... or I'm just crap at it.
Oh Sessh, you can be so cruel sometimes.
Is he ever going to be a bit nicer to people in general?
Yay! Character development! Three cheers!
Seriously though, you capture the characters perfectly. It's like I'm watching Inuyasha as if they decided to set it entirely in the modern day.
“I dare you to speak proper English for the remainder of the night.”
And with that sentence, I favourited this story.
Absolutely hilarious. Can you do nothing wrong?
Oh Inuyasha, why do you feel the need to swear all over the place! LOL
That is something he would say, the loudmouth :)
Oh, you have got the perfect banter for these two! I can't help but adore his new nickname, "Fluffs". It's perfect :)
Ho ho ho ho ho, cunning indeed, Sesshoumaru. Well played. XP
However you planned that chapter, it couldn't have come out any better for me! Loved it :) I can just see her mischevous expression as he stares at her tongue in that sweet cool confection...
"I wanted to do a lot more to her than just kissing.
She finally turned to look at me, and her coral blue eyes widened in surprise.
I knew what she saw.
Lust."
...Is it bad that I shivered?
Wow, you certainly know how to create a wonderful feeling of delightful anticipation- what will she do? What will he do? What will I do if I don't read the next chapter? It's a really fun read :)
Aww! Shichi Go San?? I love to see pics of cute children dressed up in traditional garbs!
Ahem, he seems to be having a hard time pleasing that tuny vixen XDD
Phyllis (Chapter 53) - Tue 16 Jul 2013
Time to explain, Sesshomaru! Love the updates!
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