Rin is so darling.
Very nice chapter! Sorry for that last review. I lost my place!
I really liked the last line about the rain in this chapter!
Lmaooo please update that was cute!
Loving both chapters, keep it coming.
More, keep it coming.
Loving all three chapters, keep it coming.
Ah, sex-induced writer's block. There are worse problems to have, lol. Nice updates!
Wow, those are some stiff rules. HA! See what I did there? ;)
Reciprocity is the key, 'Gome!! :)
Bad timing, Kagome! This is getting good!
He's trying so hard to resist!
Awww!!! I just love their small moments together.
Especially Sesshy's persona. Now he's a sly one! ;)
Sesshy, thank you for having amazing patience and fortitude:)
Kagome, don't screw this up! Lololol
More! More! :3
All fourteen chapters are great, keep it coming.
I really admire how you sped their sexual advances up and then smoothly slowed them down.
That's some nice writing you got going there Knight.
I really can't wait to see where you take their relationship next! :)
Oh! And here's a prompt: Toxic.
Why can't there be more guys like this in the world! Lol
Why!?!?
I think Sesh might have raised the bar for first time partners. :)
Oh no! Kagome! Since when were you such a vixen!!! XD
YES!!! She should have had him call her 'Master'! Lolol
Hah! She ran like a rabbit and the dog's totally gonna give chase! XD
First sentence is missing an 'of' but other than that this chapter is perfect. :)
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