I wonder if he'll go looking for her now to finish what was started, or if inu and parents will know what possessed him? Totally invested!

I really like this story. However, I feel like Kagome needs to be stronger and kicked more butt. Also, some parts don't flow great, maybe I was expecting more dialogue. Either way great chapters can't wait to read more. 

Damn that was good loved it...   I can imagine the fear and torture Kagome's mind is thinking but none can come close to what Sesshomaru wants, his hatred and desire to destroy Kagome for everything miko have done in the past.  Wonder what Inu Yasha thinks when he smells his brother on Kagome and the damage he'd done to her and the fight that happened between them.  The beast wants more than to hurt her wonder what will happen next....  

Please continue!  I desperately want to see what happens. Your writing is fantastic! 

Interesting story. Hopefully you will continue!

Absolutely loved this chapter and the theme it has going on!

Please continue on with this story as I will be following along it evey step of the way!

Please...please write more! This is amazing and I'm hooked!

Welcome back!!!! I am soo happy that you came back to this story! What an intense chapter, I can't believe she got away from Sesshomaru!! So crazy, I can not wait until the next chapter, and how Sesshomaru will catch her....the next time. Can't wait until the next chapter!!

Holy hell...this chapter..this entire tale is fantastic! I am captured by the dark nature of this plot and of Sesshomaru. He is so utterly sadistic. I LOVE IT! I also enjoyed how you've portrayed Kagome in this, helpless, innocent, like a doe who has been caught in the headlights of an uncoming vehicle. This is brilliantly written. I do hope you continue it some day. This is just too good!

Oooooooh my gooooodness gracious!!!! This was HOT and beautifully written! I enjoyed that dream sequence. Bravo!

This is but the first chapter and it is delightfully filled with angst, pain, sorrow, an unspoken love. I enjoyed how you've concluded it. He caught her! 

Great story can't wait to see where t goes! Are you planning on updating???

i would have  laughed if she  sent him flying through the house  with her power and made a run for it

Awesome story can't wait for next update. Luv it

Loving it, keep it coming.

OMG! WRITE MORE AND NOW! I am loving this...you cant just leave me hanging like that!

That last paragraph was exceptional. What a great visual. Can't wait for the next update.

Very interesting!! I'm favoriting it to watch for updates 8)

thanks for the update.

next chapter please