Damn, I'm so hooked. This is beautifully written--the bit in the third chapter describing a mother who lost her child? I've been there (part of me will always exist there) and you nailed it. Keep it up; I want so badly to see how this goes.
Keep it coming.
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So...incredibly wow
Talk about sad!
rose (Chapter 3) - Fri 07 Jun 2013
next chapter please
Wow.....poor Kagome! Can't Sesshomaru be a LITTLE more patient with her?
So he's basically forced marriage on her and will, more or less, rape a suicidal woman to make himself feel better about not fulfilling his duty? I don't understand how this will restore his honor. Why didn't he just revive her and take her into his home without the whole forced mating thing?
A very touching and telling chapter. Keep it coming. Very well written!
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
Uuu! :)
rose (Chapter 2) - Thu 06 Jun 2013
next chapter please
O.O Holy Crap.....That was just awesome!! Please upsate soon, this is pretty cool!!
Excellent chapter. Thank you for the quick update. Keep it coming!
Likin' the story thus far, however, I do have one question. In the first chapter, you mention her lips being bloody. Then, in the second chapter, it sounds as though she slit her wrists. So... why is there blood on her lips...? Just curious.
Anywho, keep up the good work! Can't wait for more!
Good story so far. I feel so sorry for Kagome.
Oh, you must continue this. It really has me interested so update soon and then keep it coming!
rose (Chapter 1) - Wed 05 Jun 2013
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