Reviews for Shadow by Avery Silver

LadyBri23 (Chapter 5) - Tue 05 Mar 2019

Still here after 5 years! I love rereading every chapter youve written for this story so far. Can’t wait to see what happens next!


Pourri (Chapter 5) - Thu 23 Jan 2014

Good but you've confused youki with youkai.  Youki in fanfic usually describes the spiritual power that a youkai, or a demon, has while the demon itself, like Sesshoumaru is called a youkai not a youki.

Secondly Kagome is actually a hanyou, like Inuyasha, being a halfbreed having a youkai father and a human mother, or vice versa.  She is not an inuyoukai, but she is part inuyoukai.  Hanyou can mean any mix of human and youkai lineage regardless of the type of youkai one of the parents is. 

Thirdly it would be fairly obvious to Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru that Kagome is a hanyou that being she'd have likely canine ears and slit pupils like Inuyasha.  I'm sure that Inuyasha and Sesshy would notice that she's part inuyoukai too.  Dogs have an excellent sense of smell.  They'd notice  that she's more like them than say Kouga whose an ookami or wolf-youkai.  Difference in scent.

The Alpha dynamics are interesting, but Sesshy and Inu wouldn't actually be Kagome's Alphas unless she was part of their Pack, which she wouldn't be unless she joined their family.  The social hierarchies within teenage social groups don't neccessarily count.  They would merely be her seniors if they are older at school, but not have authority over her in the sense of an Alpha, being that neither are her father, who is the Alpha of their family.  After their Dad, Souta would be the Beta-Male, being senior to Kagome because he's her older brother, thus he watches over her, even though her Dad is not his Dad. 

Atleast that's how I'd envision the Pack Alpha dynamics.  You probably have a different idea.

 

 

 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Sun 15 Sep 2013

More, keep it coming.


Kirsten (Chapter 4) - Thu 11 Jul 2013

Moar...now please? T^T I needs more.


Melody Vengeance (Chapter 4) - Sat 08 Jun 2013

Please update more I loved it -fan girl screech in background- there goes my sister 


Chao (Chapter 2) - Thu 06 Jun 2013

Uhm,... I think you mispell 'Youkai' to youki....^^


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 4) - Thu 06 Jun 2013

Keep it coming.


mari (Chapter 4) - Thu 06 Jun 2013

loving it thanks.


rose (Chapter 4) - Thu 06 Jun 2013

next chapter please


rose (Chapter 3) - Wed 05 Jun 2013

next chapter please


mari (Chapter 3) - Tue 04 Jun 2013

love this story can't wait for more thanks.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Tue 04 Jun 2013

Keep it coming.


Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Tue 04 Jun 2013

Ooooooooo I like it!!!! Update Please!!!!


Molly Hooper Holmes (Chapter 2) - Tue 04 Jun 2013

I really like your story so far, and really can't wait to see wear you're going with this. One thing is bugging me though: how is Kagome planning on hiding the fact that she is a half-demon? If everyone knows that Souta, a human, is her half brother, won't it be kind of obvious? I guess we'll just have find out! :)  Keep up the good work!


rose (Chapter 2) - Mon 03 Jun 2013

next chapter please


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Mon 03 Jun 2013

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.


Akita (Chapter 1) - Mon 03 Jun 2013

I totally can't wait to see what happens with this!


Moonlight Silk (Chapter 1) - Mon 03 Jun 2013

Good first chapter. Update soon. And welcome to dokuga!


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