You did a great job of writing this from Inuyasha's point of view :)

This is really lovely. It is interesting to see Inuyasha's POV and the ending was surprisingly gentle. I was kind of worried about how Inuyasha will react :)

I think this was really a cute and sweet one shot. :3

Great oneshot!

I loved the InuYasha POV. You did a really awesome job!

I think you kept all of the characters very true to themselves.

Loved this!

~Starfyre

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.