Ooooo..... visions of another reality.... wonder what Fluffy will think of that

A dream??? Was this all a dream? Poor Kagome! This was so heartbreaking. I fought not to cry. He dumps her and Rin after all the promises he made her, tells her they'll never be together. Was this part real? Did Kagome dream this too? I'm confused but a good confused. It means you did a good job with the twists and turns of the story. Well, sleep beckons once again. I always seem to see this at night or to some, very early morning. Until the next time....JEN

Oh, you mean mean author you! As much as you would think I didn't enjoy getting that whopper of a chapter- I throughly enjoyed it! You broke my heart and gave me a laugh with Kagome busting through his door and I imagine this disheveled looking Kagome being herself and melting more ice from the cold demon by her show of concern for thier future. It was a diverse chapter and I'm loving the progression of this story. You know what you're doing. Keep it up!

Though, I am rooting to see some action and I don't know if you're planning on delivering it and a side of badass, kicking-ass Kagome- ethier way, like I said "you know what you're doing"

Oh my Jesus. I have never left a review for anyone since I found Dokuga (roughly 5 years ago), but this chapter left me speechless. The whole time I forced myself to keep reading because things were getting worse and at the last half it almost brought me to tears. NEVER have I ever wanted a story to not end like you were leading it in my 21 years of reading than now. Every time it got worse I just thought "no not like this, never like this!" You my dear are truley gifted in writing and I look forward to reading more of your stories!

Keep it coming.

OH MY GOSH!!!!! I love the turn of events you put there. It was perfect!! Even though I'm sad that they won't be together 4 how ever long I think that it's good 2 have something like that in a story. Hope you update soon!!!!!!

Oh this is getting quite interesting. He decides he's going to take her as a lover and flirts with her, then she meets a very weary looking InuYasha who says very little while in Sessh's presence but she notices something between the two brothers and now Sesshoumaru is telling her they need to separate for...maybe 2 years? or permantly??? Has he found out she is Kikyou's reincarnation? Did Naraku somehow find a way to live or has he too been reincarnated and is starting the same old trouble? Oh, so many questions...I so love a good mystery!!! Well, time to sleep. This was great... until the next time!   JEN

Keep it coming.

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Both chapters are great, keep it coming.

That was great! I can't wait for the next chapter and what Sango has to say. Will Kagome heed her warning or fall hopelessly and helplessly in love with Sesshoumaru and vice a versa?

I love it!!!!!!!! The trasition in Sesshomaru from cold to loving was great!! Hope you get to update sometime soon:)

Your story is well written, keep up the good work.

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Keep up the good work, you are doing well.

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