They way you explained that poor girls death gave me chills! Your so gosh darn talented! I'm actually pretty afraid of Naraku's character here!
This is really good. I mean, really REALLY good. The chracterizations are perfect so far, especially Inuyasha and his father. Usually I find both characters incredibly annoying, but you've managed to make them both enjoyable.
I don't have an issue with the amount of detail. It's refreshing to see the amount of research you undertook to get the terminology just right, even everyday items like the item used to absorb water from the storm.
Anyway, the story is great so far. Do we have long to wait for an update? I hope not.
Hello, I must say this story is marvelous! I have read and read and read endless stories and there are only a handful that have been a real Page-turner! It's well written, no confusion, haven't seen any grammar errors (I'm some times blinded to that) and the flow of the story as to how fast the setting moves is almost perfect. It's not overly detailed, however, it seems like you might have gotten a little carried away with detail but I say that only because I'm going to be honest... I did skim over some unneeded detail. I would like to point out that sesshomaru seems to already suspect kagome to quickly even if he convinces himself otherwise. It would have been a great chance for suspense! But now sesshomaru already unconsciously knows which would be difficult for suspense to grow in the viewers/readers mind.
Other than that, this was worthy of a review!
Keep up the good work and have a great day.
Eryn (Chapter 6) - Thu 24 Aug 2017
Awwwe Inu! Love this chapter!
Kae (Chapter 6) - Fri 11 Aug 2017
Wow! What great action! I was really on the edge of my seat!
Leaora (Chapter 6) - Fri 11 Aug 2017
This is a very interesting reality you'very created. I am excited to see how Kahome's personalit clashes clashes with her role as a feudal woman. The last part with her cursing in front of Inuyasha is a perfect setup for their turbulent friendship. I hope they drive Sesshomaru batty!
DevaG (Chapter 6) - Thu 10 Aug 2017
I love this story... OMG please update soon. I am fully invested.
This is such an excellent fic! I've thoroughly enjoyed it so far. I really like that Kagome is not only a secret miko, but also the secret lead actor. And Inuyasha coming upon her in this chapter was awesome! I can't wait to see what will happen next! Keep up the great work!
- CA
I just found this story now that Chapter 6 has been posted, and I read all of the chapters so far in one sitting. I have to say -- wow! The writing style and descriptions are fantastic. It has easy to read dialog, great grammar and spelling, and I found myself not wanting to stop reading the story. I really want to read more of this story too, so I look forward to future chapters. I cannot wait to see how Kagome and Souta are going to deal with the performances in front of the four lords, as well as Kagome's power now that Inuyasha knows she's a miko.
Then, I looked at prior reviews... it's been three years since the prior chapter was posted? Ugh. I hope that the story will continue without waiting another three years for Chapter 7. Please consider finishing this story with much more consistent updates! Please? Pretty please? Pretty pretty please??
Kae (Chapter 5) - Wed 06 Aug 2014
I was so glad to see this updated! I'm really enjoying it!
I couldn't wait for this new update! I really loved your story and I can't wait to read what's next! Great job!
guest (Chapter 5) - Sat 02 Aug 2014
Keep it coming!! #super_excited
guest (Chapter 5) - Sat 02 Aug 2014
Keep it coming!! #super_excited
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired two episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube and episode 3 of Sailor Moon Crystal airs tomorrow. Good, keep it coming
This is going to be very interesting! I absolutely cannot wait.
Sailor Moon new anime is starting on July 5. Great, keep it coming.
What Makes A Dad
God took the strength of a mountain, The majesty of a tree, The warmth of a summer run, The calm of a quiet sea, The generous soul of nature, The comforting arm of night, The wisdom of the ages, The power of the eagle's flight, The joy of a morning in spring, The faith of a mustard seed, The patience of eternity, The depth of a family need, Then God combined these qualities, When there was nothing more to add, He knew His masterpiece was complete, And so, He called it...Dad.
Happy Father's Day!
Kae (Chapter 4) - Wed 11 Jun 2014
Glad to see this going again! I love to see the historically accurate (mostly) stories so MUCH!
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