interesting story, looking forward to more!
p.s. nice taste in music!
This has me intrigued, killing Kohaku right off the bat by what appears to be Sesshomaru who you've painted as the antogonist no less. Also, the part where they said he died already raises questions in mind, such as, is this Naraku/Onigumo in disguise or is it really Sesshomaru? On a side note, I really enjoyed your brief description of the clouds, mountain, and the environment. Gave it a fantastical sort of feeling. Keep it rolling!
