A good read even after such a long time! I read it a third time I think! Thx for writing this and sharing with us! I enjoyed it a lot!
I happened by this fic when someone was looking for help finding it in the forum. I immediately went to look it up and was absolutely hooked. I stayed with it until I finished the whole fic. Sorry for not reviwing each chapter but this was too enchanting to stop to review.
I totally enjoyed your storyline and the way Kagome and Sesshoumaru were brought together. Imagine, Sesshoumaru with 2 girls!!!! So funny. I cannot believe he'd stop having pups at just two. I'd bet he convince her down the line to try again, because after all, they have centuries to live and children make the family line grow stronger. They were close to distinction after all.
Just liked to say that you have a great talent at writing and I hope to see much more work from you. This was a true hit!!!
JEN
Good Story. Wish there were more end details as to who the girl mate, or atleast some more siblings
In the world of fanon you guys are kinda sexist. Why do most fanfic writers make demon pregnancies PAINFUL without the male? I can understand instinct drawing them closer but unnaturall pain non pregnacy related, before the birth, is a little much.And then there's the mating mark removal pain that causes death to tye FEMALE, and typically not the male. Ha you fanfic folks are a little rough around the edges. I do like the biting for the mating though, I will not tell a lie
i wass starting to like this story, but Sesshoumaru is waaay out of character, it to disconcerting for me to finish.
tailor (Chapter 2) - Mon 25 Nov 2013
r u aware you put the word cum> as in orgasm at the begining of ch.2 : - <
Okay, that was awesome, and adorable, and a very good read!
Excellent! Thanks for sharing!
lmao! great chapter
They should really just agree that Sesshomaru can be the substitute for Kagomes little problem! Great story!
Definately liking the dragon! She's determined to get them together!
Wow I cant even begin to think of the Inu bloodline dying out! Hopefully Sesshomaru finds Kagome soon
interesting!
Mimiru (Chapter 5) - Thu 20 Jun 2013
Oh noes!! XDD
yay! Drama and excitement!
Mimiru (Chapter 4) - Thu 20 Jun 2013
That was so sad. But the death adds more to the story as sad as it is.
Mimiru (Chapter 2) - Thu 20 Jun 2013
Makes me wounder if kagome knew of the genocide of the hanyou's,
would she really want to be near some of those demons that caused it?
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