This was sweet.
How God Created Mother
Good took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
This is so simple and sweet :)
Ahhh!
In a good way!
Loveyaa (Chapter 1) - Fri 03 May 2013
I really liked this. It was short and cute (and enjoyable), but compact, dense. Its all the little moments that add up. I can't wait to see what you come up with next :)
Awe! The fluffiness! I want to drag it to bed with me and cuddle it! It's so snuggly. I likes the fluff. C: I likes it a lots.
Now I needs more fluffy. Must have fluffy! Right up until I have to write the next chapter. You've all had enough fluffy for a while... MwaHahahahahaha! Ahem. I'm better. *returns to cuddling the fluff*
Great little story, hun! Hope you can get your little one wrangled and into dream land tonight!
~Starfyre
This was one of the sweetest and loveliest pieces of work I have ever read. I loved the simple flow of the story and how the time skips seemed normal not too drawn out or out of place! Keep up the amazing work!
Beautiful and well-written. Fluff is always welcome when so much angst abounds.
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