just noticed something: Tsukiko is a girl's name (because of the -ko); Tsuki might be a similar male alt, but i'm not sure... would be a pain in the ass to go through and redo, wouldn't it? oh well
All I can say is wow, this is honestly one of the very best fanfictions I have ever had the pleasure of reading and that is indeed saying something. I have read and written quite a few. If I were to hazard a guess I would say you are actually a professional writer using fanfiction to blow off steam, stress, or writers block from your current novel. I know of a couple best sellers who admit to doing exactly that time to time. I cannot wait for the next chapter and the next after that. Terribly rude of me I am aware I just was wishing our favorite puppy eared boy has to really work for his black eared fox, perhaps if she was to have a past trama she needs to overcome? Where Inuyasha has to grow and change himself to be more patient and wise ect., achingly slow of coarse. A little dark heart ache to overcome in any story is well used as long as it is not stereotypical or missrepresntation of victims of any sort. Enough rudness,long stories are in such short supply and quality ones more so. I am so very happy with your writing! Anyways Thank you again for such a wonderful story!
