This was so beautiful. It was in character, grammatically correct,  and flowed smoothly as a story should

I loved the ending! Especially how you let her keep her memories!
The angst came across real and the harship of finally letting go of the anger and hatred....I really liked it!

good story, nice angst too.

But I didn't understand why the sword wouldn't work? Sesshomaru cared for her and had compassion so why wouldn't it work?

This story was awesome and amazing, and it had a wonderful ending. Happy Mother's Day! 

Like, keep it coming. 

Omg even if the ending was so sad and i wish she didn't die it was.a.great ending!!!!!

oooh... im guessing sess will come to his senses and then goes to look for her... hmm just update soon i really love your story^^

there was so much drama, but it was just enough without being overwhelming. you took the story to a great direction adn i cant wait to see sesshoumaru's reaction (if he even has one) so please continue updating  :)  once again,  great job

Drama, keep it coming. 

You should at leadt write theb ending to tell us wat happen please :P

Wow what an intense chapter/ story! I love this chapter and this story. I just started reading it and I was hooked! I can't wait until you write the nex chapter!!! 

THis chapter was great. I can't wait for the next one.

Like it, keep it coming. Happy Easter!

oooooh i kind of expected this, but after ACTUALLY reading it, my god, it's intense.please please please continue. i cannot wait to see how kagome reacts after this (well, reacts more...)   anyways!  this is amazing and i love it! so please continue

very intense story! I love it! keep up the good work :D

The only thing that could make it better is more

Nice, keep it coming. Happy Early Easter!

but i like time

specially lemon time

Great story, looking foward to see more!!

oh my god....just...oh my god...you're five chapters in and i am already addicted.  i love the love-hate relationship that you've created. many authors TRY to do that, but they always end up being way too violent and brutal or they fall in love too fast (in fluffly love)   you've made a perfect balance at the moment, which isn't easy to achieve,  so great job on the fic so far.  and i hope to read more in the future :)