LadyoftheLemons (Chapter 2) - Fri 22 Feb 2019

Please pick this back up


(Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Apr 2013

@Paradise_Kiss

Thank you. I will correct it right away. 


Paradise_Kiss (Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Apr 2013

Yeah actually I do, but I'm not sure what you were trying to say;

If it was "heart's warmth" then it should be kokoro no takakasa. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


(Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Apr 2013

@Paradise_Kiss 

Sorry if my mistake bother you. I am not very good at Japanese but I tried, ya know. Any correction you have for me then?


@KouseiJL

Thank you for your encouraging review! It is that kind of stuff that helps me :D


KouseiJL (Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Apr 2013

Interesting concept and a nice start with the intrigue of Ayano (Ayane?). Congrats on having the courage to put it out here, and I look forward to your next chapter!


Paradise_Kiss (Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Apr 2013

So having a mistake in a title doesn't bother you?


(Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Apr 2013

Yes I do know :) But thank you for pointing it out.


Paradise_Kiss (Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Apr 2013

Do you know what what does kokoro no tatakai mean?

Heart's (is) warm


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