Oh, she has them now! Wonderful update!

Leading her down the path. Oh my!! Lovely update. Thank you. 

Another delightful chapter. Thanks so much. 

Hence the walk slowly admonition. Ah well! Lovely update. 

Delightful chapters. Nothing like a fairy tale to tuck you into bed with. Love this story. Thanks for the update.

Aw, sweet. Thanks for the update. 

So sad and sweet. I'm still a bit confused but I'm hoping that all will be clear as we go along. 

Aw... Sweet!

Wow! Just two short drabbles and I want to read more! Ii can't wait to see where this goes.

Omg! Howwwww cute .... Raven!!! Update pleasssssssse!! 

Good story overall but I think there are points where you can put more details/flesh it out throughout to build the relationship. I'm assuming Kagome does not look anything like she does now in the future since the kid has not recognize her as her mom. Raven has a good personality. Should be interesting to see how the story develops.

I'm intrigue with the story so far. So she isn't Kagome's?

All six chapters are nice, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

All three chapters are great, keep it coming.

Keep it coming.

All four chapters are great, keep it coming.

next chapter please

next chapter please

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.