she could yell at him telling him what a bad father he was for ignoring rin for women xDDDD
That was awesome!
Don't even think of altering it! You could blow it up into a huge 30 chapter monster and still come to the same ending, but this was great, and it cut the awkwardness of dealing with potential "step-sibblings" being attracted to each other blah blah blah.
I seriously giggled out loud (alone in my home, and that usually creeps me out). Thanks for the great short & to the point fic.
Loved it!
This was a great sory and I enjoyed it!
I have a couple things to say about this Fic:
1st: I was rolling in the floor laughing like a mad woman!! and
2nd: I hope you continue this fic, bc it has a HUGE potential, so please dont end it here like this!!!
Other than that soo far so good!!! =]
Nelly (Chapter 4) - Sat 20 Apr 2013
That didn't last long, they at the beach for what, like 10 minutes?
Nelly (Chapter 3) - Sat 20 Apr 2013
HAha she is super pissed, I can almost feel it through the computer. I would be too!
Nelly (Chapter 2) - Sat 20 Apr 2013
Hhah the look they must of had on their face
Nelly (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Apr 2013
This story cracked me up!
Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Sat 20 Apr 2013
the kagome you portray is such an idiot, push-over, and can't even defend herself verbably, pathetic. totally not the real kagome. the only thing you seem to keep is her temper. i don't thing i'll be reading any future updates of yours. your kagome sucks.
Megan (Chapter 4) - Sat 20 Apr 2013
REALLY!!???? You cant end it like that!!! It was just starting to get good!!!
"Hey! What do you mean that's it?" :O Please continue writing T_T
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