Nice chapter. Keep it coming---well done!
Awww, so sweet of Sesshomaru to take care of Souta as well - though, probably for the boy's safety.
I'm curious what villain it was that Shippo had transformed into that Halloween?
Glad to see you continue this. Take your time with it and try not to rush it. Everything will come in time ^-^
I am in LOVE with your story. I can't wait to see where you go next with it and I love how in this her Mom is a bad guy. I love it!!! I can't wait for each new chapter. Thank you for your story
Stina
rose (Chapter 2) - Fri 19 Apr 2013
next chapter please
I'm glad that you are continuing. It does not have to be a long, drawn out story; just go for it amd see where it takes you.
Nice chapter by the way. Update soon if posssible.
TKE (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Apr 2013
Very happy to see its continued.....love it!
Nyuka (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Apr 2013
Well if you want to avoid your fears, you could make this a chapter story, but make it seem like each chapter is the end... that way if you don't get the inspiration to keep going you can't say that the story is unfinished. It would be like each chapter is a one shot in relation to the last chapter. ^-^
rose (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Apr 2013
next chapter please
Eve (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Apr 2013
Love the first chapter.
Greatly looking forward to the rest of the story to unfold!
tonya (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Apr 2013
i think this is great! i can't wait to see what happens next!
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