Very depressing.   Good job, you convey the feeling of a sad, broken man.

Whoa this was amazing, a scene was painted you have a way with words

Holy shit

So upset that i read this.i promised I would avoid dark stories like this but i didn't see it coming smh

Very moving.  I liked it.

The story was great.

Oh, wow. He killed Kagome. Is he going to kill himself now ... or Rin??? A good story, full of angst. I hope you keep going with it.