| keep it coming! i like the beginning, it's already got me hooked. i'll be waiting for the next chapters.    
 | This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.    
 | VERY interesting story s far...spelling is an issue, though. Can't wait for the next chapter    
 
rose (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Apr 2013 | next chapter please    
 
tonya (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Apr 2013 | awesome! i can't wait to see what happens next!    
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