Keep it coming.

Great chapter!  I liked seeing things from Kagome's perspective as she tries to have him released.  The fight and her containing him at the end was well done.

The way you portray Kagome's response to Sesshomaru's (?) condition came through very well.  It really had me wondering how horribly he looked.

this sounds interesting. i am a  huge scifi fan. hope to see this continued im curious as to what predators now inhabit the earth!

Excelllent start!  I look forward to seeing where this story goes.  I love the premise and the background history was just enough - nothing like SCIFI to liven up a story.  I wonder why/how they become partners and for what?  What is Kagome's story? as well as Sesshomaru's?  

I look forward to your next chapter!

Sounds great, looking forward to where you take this.

Different but very enjoyable! I's REALLY excited for the next chapter!

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.