This story was amazing! I read it all in one sitting and couldn't get up until it was done. I especially loved how you showed Kagome and Sesshomaru's experiences while in the other's body. Their understanding of what was happenign to the other while becoming seduced all the same was especially entertaining. Also, loved Kagome's playful forwardness while in Sesshomaru's form and his almost demureness in hers, yet they kept integral parts of their personality and you continued to refer to them by the genders of their born sex. Loved it all around!  

very good story. i liked it. well worth reading. it was sad that she lost the pup. but i can understand when she said she didn't want the babe, then when she lost it mourned the fact that it was gone. this story had feelings in it that i had never read in a story b4. you are a very good writner. keep it up and i'll be sure to read more of your fanfics. c'ya'

Wow... Mind-blowing story. You are amazing! You pulled off the switcheroo perfectly! And your words! You are truly a wordsmith. The way you write every little detail and nuance is so beautiful and meaningful. So many times I had to search the meaning of the words you use to truly appreciate your story. Thanks for this lovely tale. 

The premise is interesting, but your writing style for this story is trying too hard to be poetic. Sometimes it worked, most of the time it didn't for my tastes. It gave me the impression that either you were using a thesaurus or tried to fulfill a word-challenge every chapter. Going by the reviews it seems that you've made a revision somewhere and possibly overhauled the entire story? I would have been interested in reading the original version since I've been skimming for the past 10 or so chapters now.

What an amazing story. When I began to read it I thought it was lighthearted comedy, then it turned hot.. then somber, then passionate, then full of angst and desperation. And finally it was lovely hehe 

The writing changed not just in this chapter but a few before! The starter chapters are a completely different writing style from these that came later. Its a bit strange almost like the author is trying to hard so now things seem a little inconsistent. The growth is welcome but such a drastic change in the same story will not go unnoticed

No fair Kags didn't get to cum before switching! Urghhh!

Noooo! How can you end it at such a tumultuous place?! It has left an ache of incompletion where happiness should be! I'm sad...it was a beautiful piece despite the ending

Ooooh Weee!

LoL!!!! I stand corrected...she seems mortified

While funny, this is a little naive and  insulting...yes she's Japanese but she's still from a future where sex and reproduction are shoved in your face constantly, not to mention she's a teenage female, masturbation shouldn't be something she needs explained to her...

Just wow!!!!! This was an amazing tale. Absolutely amazing.

Sorry too lazy to log in.  I don't usually read fics like this, but out of curiousity I decided to take the plunge.  Call it following a post on the forum.  I took a look after clicking on a link.  Wow.  It was really good.  Skimmed here and read there, but got to the end all the same.  Such beautiful language, with a musical lyrical quality.  I really enjoyed reading this one.  Sesshy was especially sweet in the end, and Kagome a little spitfire, just how she should be to match his arrogance.

A real treasure to read, especially the ending. 

I like the tinge of uncertainty, even after they fulfil that mating bond.  It's so esoteric with a lovely dash of realism.

An enjoyable read.

Thank you!

WOW!!! LOVED THE ENDING AND WISHED THERE WAS MORE!!

I just gotta say I thoroughly loved this fic. It was a fun read. What struck me the most though, was the love scene at the end. Your syntax and diction was amazing. Just wow.

"She clamored for ancient rituals, primeval desires, feral, whispered she didn't care for slow motions, for tamed passion. "

All of the action is described in short phrases marked by contstant commas, which when read gave it such a feeling of desperate passion. There was nothing slow about it, and you conveyed this so well just by using grammar. Your word choice was great too. It was definitely a sex scene, but that sounds too crude for the words you used.

I just wanted to say how beautiful your writing is. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Oh dear, I'm already worried about what is going to happen when someone tries to find sesshomaru.

Reading the revised chapters again just saw tht it was inspired by secret garden :P nicee I liked  that drama too ^_^ 

This was a very beautiful, original, and well written story.  It made me laugh, cry, and touched my heart deeply. Thanks for sharing your storytelling magic, Stella.

You did a fantastic job with ending this story, though i hate that it ended. Great job! Can't wat for your next story!!