*Finally, some good f*cking food* (I hope someone gets the meme reference loll) Anyways!! I love it. I loooooove it. I was so hooked, I was saying it aloud how good this story is!!!! This is my first ever review, too. The writing was so good, clean, which is so important to me. I love the way you wrote Sesshomaru; he is obviously different from the show/manga, but still true to his straightforward, serious, regal demeanor that we love him for! Personally, I think you've written this story with an amazing mixture/amount of sweet, touching moments, of suspense, romance... and the lemon... it was so sexy, sultry, intimate.. Ok, I hope i don't sound like a weirdo, but you did an AMAZING job! Kudos to you for writing one of the most lovely stories on this site!
A beautiful, sweet story! A captivating read! I couldn't put it down! What a surprise twist! I wasn't expecting it but so glad that in spite of it Sess and Kag got their happily ever after!
Two thumbs way up, baby! This was an amazing two shot! <3
Serah Luna (Chapter 1) - Sat 12 Dec 2015
i tried reading this with an open mind but I feel like you use way too many adjectives and over describe the characters
Raynell (Chapter 2) - Wed 02 Sep 2015
i enjoyed this tale, like all of your stories. Don't stop writing. Thanks for sharing your creativity.
Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Wed 26 Aug 2015
Loved it.
I love your story. It has the feel of an Inuyasha episode; drama, forbidden love, envy, lovers turned enmies, the whole lot. I like how you made your villans very Onigumo like. I didn't expect the curse to turn Kagome in to a Yuki-Onna, but I love how you pulled it off.
nadine (Chapter 2) - Mon 12 Jan 2015
Beautifully written. Its a shame the story had to be so short. perhaps a sequel? Look forward to reading more stories from you.
Rose (Chapter 2) - Sat 10 Jan 2015
I enjoyed reading it very much.
I am glad that you finally finished this two-shot. Very well done and with excellent writing skills. Great job!
There are three story plots that have the idea of the yuki-onna that I know of : 'Snow' by NicoRavenPen, 'The birth of a Yuki-onna' by Hairann and 'Blizzard' by Rewriting Life which are all excellent stories by fantastic authors that can be found on this website.
This story really made me swooon and squeal and blush ^_^ it was just sooo nice. And if you ever wanted, this story can easily be extended into a longer story. Really awesome work. I loved it!
I am so glad you added this chapter. This was such an interesting storyline. Since Sessh is often written as an Ice Inu, he would be the perfect choice for the newly changed miko. Very nice and a very satisfying end for them both. Lovely. Cheers!
Eva (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Jan 2015
I loved your story. There are very few ideas in this world that are completely unique. It's how you interpret them that make them your own. You did very well putting your own signature spin on it. Thanks for sharing.
iin (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Jan 2015
STEAM HOT!! AS USUAL!! Love your story as always....
No Uta (Chapter 2) - Thu 08 Jan 2015
Yay!!!! A fantastic two shot ha ha! Loved every word. I didn't see the curse of the yuki-onna coming at all. I enjoyed it. It was a first for me. I liked the concept. I look forward to reading more of your work.
That was amazing. I am do glad thst you decided to add another chapter. I love Miss Stella. Her stories rock! So glad I am following you now too.
Leonzite (Chapter 2) - Wed 07 Jan 2015
This was so sweet and nice! This two shot made me want more... but it is already semisolved and I would love to read the ups and downs on court... I like it this way too. Short, simple, sweet and oh so erotic~
Great story. I enjoyed the twist and turns with in.
This was nice, Happy New Year!
A very good story with such a nice twist
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