I really, really enjoy this reworking you have done. I look forward to leaning how this story goes! <3
Wow he finally got her back that was a great chapter...
Freaking love this and want more. Can't wait!
That was a great chapter loved it. Can't wait to read more to find out what really happened.
You should draw some animation.... Just imagine a lil chubby inuyasha giving sesshoumaru moms a Eskimo kiss on da cheek so kawaiii
The last line is powerful.
Now, I want to know she did. Was he the one she was put in prison for?
I really want to know what she did. Hopefully she did not kill Rin.
Ah man he has one hell of a time to go through all the pain and torment he caused Kagome to even reach her before forgiveness may or may not be given. Hopefully he learns what he needs to... And what is this Naraku coming back to life... Another fault of his for not having someone protect her while he is away.... Damn how did he even exscape? Great chapter update soon.
It is so strong in description and strength of words. I had to reread a few times. I wonder if she will be herself when she comes back
Wow. Really great chapter. This really helps to understand the foundation of their relationship before moving forward. Well done.
Ok seriously wtf is gong on here? I'm completely enthralled and yet, I know you don't have many chapters posted yet so I don't want to get too involved in case you bail. BUT, OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR.
Holy shit
SO MUCH STORY TO TELL!!! I love this opening. This could go any number of ways. Well written and nice cliffy to boot!
Oh my word. Its SO good. I'm so excited for more.
Not sure what's going on, but I really like it so far!
Wow, just wow.
Hoping you may consider picking this story back up!!
Ah, I remember this one now. I loved it back then and I love it Still. Hope you continue!
Come it, keep it coming.
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