dear nini,
Even though I never had any military upbringing either by schooling or profession, your description of the cadets' schedule and the way you detalied the Mess scene etc., your story brought me nostalgic memories of my boarding school days. Food was scarce but there was even less time to eat the measly ration--needless to say I was a hungry child; water was scarce too--so we barely bathed; we felt lucky on days when we could both drink and bath---there was never any warm water, during winter mornings it was below 0 degree celsius; we also had to wake up at 5:00 am when it was still pitch dark outside and jog for an hour... did i mention the school was/is still located 6000 metres above sea level and eternally freezing...Now that I think about it, I wonder why I never complained to my parents about it? Ah! now I remember, we had a brilliant library, awesome fetes and socials...
I feel strong every time I remember those years... I had forgotten how to endure... thank you for the story:)
Kahnartis (Chapter 6) - Tue 19 Nov 2013
Hello!! Just a passerby. But I do love this story!!! It's something that's new and fresh and just a breath of fresh air. Congrats.
And it's something that I personally can semi relate to as my brothers are in the military.
anyway. I just found and read this story today. And it's good!! Keep it up!!
rose (Chapter 5) - Sun 04 Aug 2013
next chapter please
Loving it, keep it coming.
mari (Chapter 5) - Sun 04 Aug 2013
really loved the update thanks.
Niiice, I love the kickass Kagome. A question though; will Kagome be having miko powers here? Does she have thim already but is unwilling to use them? Or she hasn't come into them yet(though, unlikely in my opinion)? Anyway, it's a good story, and has the potential to be great. Keep it up :)
~lily
I just love this war stuff!!! please dont take too long to update this story.........PLEASE!!!!!!!!! =]
mari (Chapter 4) - Tue 28 May 2013
this is really good story loved it thanks.
rose (Chapter 4) - Tue 28 May 2013
next chapter please
Please update the next chapter quick, it's been a month and weeks since you updated, keep it coming.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
OMG I Loved it!!!... I love the way you portrayed Kagome as a strong, kick ass chick!!! that's always a + in my book, please keep it comming. I need an update ASAP!!!! (great work by the way =] ) PS: I think the misterious guy is Naraku (maybe??) lol
Oh... no fair a cliffy. Like "The Hunger Games" I wonder what you will do? You did really good on the characterization/personalities. I hope you write soon. ^-^ It's getting good
Hm... I think it is interesting. lol at first I thought that SPOK was a shorter prefex of Spok from Star Treck. Anyway I wonder if your going to later have her old platoon be attacked while she's gone and if she were to disobay orders and try to retreave them. Or... welll that could come at a later sujestion. I keep reading. Thank you
oooh how I love this war/armi shit!!!! please update soon!!!!
please continue this story for your new fans. the story line so far seems very worthwhile and i love the way you have portrayed the characters so far. and i can't wait to see how you would develop the romance between Kagome and Sesshomaru. please up date!!!
yes you shoulld definitely continue
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