I love it! It's a bit different, but in a good way. Im wishing for a silver lining at the end, because this story was left to our own imagination. I know Sesshomaru marked Kagome, but they were both under the influence of the moon. I hope to read similar works soon
Please update???!!!
I want a story pllllllllllease......
must......find......out......what......happens......
Lumi (Chapter 1) - Fri 24 May 2013
Quite a few of the sentences got chopped off at the beginning.
Karmen (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 May 2013
Thanks for posting this I enjoyed it. I love to read some smut once in a while lol, it was very well written!
thumper (Chapter 1) - Tue 19 Mar 2013
it's good! hopefully one day you can build a story around this, but it can stand on it's own for now.
Hey, that was really nicely writted. Besides a few grammatical errors that can be fixed through a little editting, I think you've got a really great story here. I'd be glad to edit for you and hope that you decide to continue the story. I think this has potential to be more than just a one-shot. Good job and thanks for the good read.
nicole (Chapter 1) - Sun 17 Mar 2013
Fantastic. I must read more stories. I am a very honest reviewer and you deserve a positive review.
I would like to see this continued.
all fixed! and it was a good chapter! i'd really like to see more!
This was good.
Zeelian (Chapter 1) - Sat 16 Mar 2013
Wall of text critically hits for: Deathblow!
Aka it seems your formating got lost somewhere along the line making the text impossible to read and keep track of.
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