This story is great. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Yay, Kagome's side of story! I did enjoyed the mystery of big "why?", but it is nice to have some answers) And some ninjatemplar-ish things, too :D
Sailor Moon new anime has already premiered on tv last week, If you missed it you can watch it on youtube and episode 2 air this Saturday. Both chapters are great, keep it coming.
|Really nice chapter! I hope.it doesn't take you long before you update again.
(Chapter 3) - Wed 12 Mar 2014
Wow! This is fantastic! I didn't have time to read it until now and just burned through the three chapters, and I'm hungry for more! So many questions, so much excitement, I'm loving this whole thing. One thing, I ran the Russian BACK through translate, and some of the sentences didn't quite go. Is there any way you could put them in English at the end of the chapter so I know what they say?
Awesome story! Hope to see next chapter soon!
p.s. I'm professor of russian language in rl, so if you need help with phrases in russian, let me know :)
Wow! This reminds me of a movie that I saw once. Partners betraying partners and such. It was such a good movie. Anyways, I enjoyed your story thus far. I hope you will update soon.
(Chapter 2) - Wed 11 Sep 2013
WHY, Kagome, why??????? I'm torn, I know Kagome must have a reason (I hope) for her betrayal, but I am so unbelievably and unreasonably Team Sess that I actually want him to get his revenge...I think she should suffer as well and I almost feel bad about it but not really bc if it ever came down to choosing btw Sess or Kags in a match of oneupsmanship, it would ALWAYS be Sess. ALWAYS. How dare she!
Thanks for writing a nail biter!
Stell (Chapter 2) - Tue 10 Sep 2013
OMG! An update!! I had nearly forgotten this story, but reading it again, I'm on tenterhooks! Please update again soon! :)
So so late, keep it coming.
This story is going to be awesome, I know it. Please update soon!
(Chapter 1) - Fri 08 Mar 2013
Hmm, scheming Kagome and trusting (sort of) Sesshoumaru, an interesting twist. You have set up a nice little mystery here.
BTW, I noticed a few misspelled homonyms here that jumped out at me from this first chapter (but please let me know if for some reason you don't like to be notified of typos, then I won't do it anymore!)
walked passed --> should be walked past (see para. 2)
repel, repelled --> should be rappel, rappelled (meaning, to descend down the side of the building etc.) - rappel is to descend via rope, repel means to push something away (see para. 5)
Jayne (Chapter 1) - Fri 08 Mar 2013
wow i loved it i hope he doesnt kill her and she has a reason for stealing from him like protecting him in a weird way i hope you update again soon please and if she does die i hope he brings her back lol fix their relationship i cant wait to see what else you come up with :)
I read this story on fanfiction last year, I hope you continue it since it's almost a year since you last updated it! Keep it coming.
(Chapter 1) - Fri 08 Mar 2013
I remember this. Wow, what an amazing first chapter! I loved the way they met and the progression of their relationship. I really hope you cup date again soon. This story is wicked!
Impressive first chapter. Kagome shooting Sesshomaru was a real shocker. I never saw that coming. I'm eager to find out her backstory and reasons for shooting him. Thank you for such great writing.