I hope Kagome get back at Kagome, keep it coming.
I love your story. I don't know what you're going to make your next chapters about, but I hope they involve Kagome escaping and getting the cinollar off:)
anime queen 88 (Chapter 5) - Tue 19 Mar 2013
ok then just update
Amber (Chapter 5) - Tue 19 Mar 2013
I love your story so far.
that was a great chapther, I must admit that the previous was a little vague, but this was way better, continue like this
Anonymous (Chapter 5) - Tue 19 Mar 2013
Your storyline does not flow. Chapter 5 just jumps out at you without any explaination as to why she is sore and bruised. Also you have some spelling errors.
I was a little lost at the beginning of the chapther, it was confusing, the situation moved to quickly from her capture of the previous chapter to already being marked in this one, but overall it was a good chapter
um it feels like there's a chapter missing, last we saw he was carrying her home, then the next thing we saw they were waking up in his bed, then onlky the talk of abuse through the night. really some of this seems a bit out of context, i wouldnt think he'd beat her while smutting, if he's supposed tob e charishing her and all, i dunno it seems very conflicting.
leon (Chapter 5) - Tue 19 Mar 2013
i love your history!!!!!please continue!!!!
Damn this is hot. :D Can't wait for more!
I don't like this Sesshomaru, he should get his butt kick. Keep it coming.
rose (Chapter 5) - Mon 18 Mar 2013
cant wait for the next chapter
Masa (Chapter 5) - Mon 18 Mar 2013
I love ur story but it feels like you skipped over a lot between the last 2 chapters.
This looks very promising and I hope you really play up the D/s elements I'm sensing! :3 favorited! Update soon, please.
rose (Chapter 4) - Mon 18 Mar 2013
i love this story so far i cant wait for the next chapter
Sesshomaru is so evil, he should be nice to her! Keep it coming.
Love this!!! I can't wait to read more. :)
Keep it coming.
Interesting. I can't wait to see where this goes.
:D
Keep it coming.
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